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Discuss advantage and disadvantages of using cars

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Nowadays, people are more popular to have their own cars because the personal cars enable to approach to anywhere that they desire. Although there are many advantages of having owned cars, the unexpected drawbacks occur in daily life as well. According to the advantages of buying an owned car, people is actually able to go anywhere that they would like in anytime as well as their family are accessible for a personal transportation rather than public transportations, contributing to lower the cost of public transports which are significantly expensive if there have a large trip for them. Then, the driving a personal automobile could reduce the time when there is an emergency situation such as an accident in the house or hurry travelling for work in the morning. At last but not least, the good views of having owned car are mostly for the comfortable transportation in people. Nevertheless, the drawbacks of having the car is that people must carry additional burdens on their shoulders. For instance, in every day or week, if the car is usually driven, the fuel is also charged regularly. That refers that every person will have to pay for the oil or petrol gas daily or weekly and the amount of money is going to be lost by this case indeed. For my experience, most cars in present are likely to use a lot of petrol every day, depending on car’s specification despite having an alternative fuel car, known as hybrid automobile which can switch between two sources of energy, namely oil and electricity. Besides, the big problem for people when they are going to purchase a car is expensive cost of annual checking up and maintenances and also a particular car insurance which is a legal compulsory for every car in my region. Finally, with a dramatic drawback for new car drivers, it is a driver license that is very difficult to hold because of the intensive test currently. In summary, even though having car can allow people to have the best transportation, it also has many disadvantages that people need to face as driving license test.
Nowadays,
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people
are more popular to have their
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own
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cars
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because
the personal
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cars
enable to approach to anywhere that they desire. Although there are
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many
advantages of
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having
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owned
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cars
, the unexpected drawbacks occur in daily life
as well
.

According to the advantages of buying an
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owned
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car
,
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people
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is
actually able to go anywhere that they would like in anytime
as well
as their family are accessible for a personal
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transportation
rather
than public
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transportations
, contributing to lower the cost of public transports which are
significantly
expensive if there have a large trip for them. Then, the driving a personal automobile could
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reduce
the time when there is an emergency situation such as an accident in the
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house
or hurry travelling for work in the morning. At last
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but
not least, the
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good
views of
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having
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owned
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car
are
mostly
for the comfortable
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transportation
in
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people
.

Nevertheless
, the drawbacks of
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having
the
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car
is that
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people
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must
carry additional burdens on their shoulders.
For instance
, in every day or week, if the
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car
is
usually
driven, the fuel is
also
charged
regularly
. That refers that every person will
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have to
pay for the oil or petrol gas daily or weekly and the amount of money is going to
be lost
by this case
indeed
. For my experience, most
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cars
in present are likely to
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use
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a lot of
petrol every day, depending on
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car’s
specification despite
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having
an alternative fuel
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car
, known as hybrid automobile which can switch between two sources of energy,
namely
oil and electricity.
Besides
, the
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big
problem for
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people
when they are going to
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purchase
a
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car
is expensive cost of annual checking up and maintenances and
also
a particular
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car
insurance which is a legal compulsory for every
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car
in my region.
Finally
, with a dramatic drawback for new
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car
drivers, it is a driver license
that is
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very
difficult to hold
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because
of the intensive
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test
currently
.

In summary,
even though
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having
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car
can
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allow
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people
to have the best
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transportation
, it
also
has
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many
disadvantages that
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people
need to face as driving license
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test
.
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IELTS essay Discuss advantage and disadvantages of using cars

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  American English
4 paragraphs
353 words
6.0
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