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Discuss a special hotel you stayed in. Where it is, what it is like, why you went there and how you felt about it?

Discuss a special hotel you stayed in. Where it is, what it is like, why you went there and how you felt about it? VByP7
Today I would like to talk about Hotel Clark Heights in Cochin where I had got a chance to stay last to last year during my winter excursion with my loving auntie & uncle. They live in Singapore and they came to India for their trip to cochin. Luckily they took me along with them as we have a good bonding with each other. We went to Cochin by flight from Delhi. When we reached Cochin airport, we took the taxi and finally headed towards the 5-star hotel Clark Heights. As soon as we reached the entrance gate, the helping staff rushed towards our taxi. They greet us nicely and took our luggage and took us to the receptionist who welcomed all of us with great hospitality and assigned us our rooms. I was astonished to see the extensive structure of the building. Each area in the hotel was tidy. Moreover, we had got spacious rooms which were vibrant and perfectly decorated with the various paintings and flower pots. Our rooms had modern furniture, a huge T. V. and a small Refridgerator. My room also had a large window overlooking a beautiful garden. Room service was incredible and was available for all 24 hours. The rooftop had a nice pool and SPA services where people could enjoy the massages however, they were at extra charges. Wifi was free throughout the building. The hotel had a variety of cuisines available 24 by 7 and in fact, whatever we ordered was delicious and had been served quickly by the room service staff. Apart from this, we had had the 3 complimentary breakfasts within the room charges. Basically, it was a buffet with numerous items like juices, hot & cold drinks, veg & non-veg items to fruits & puddings. We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights. Although it was quite costly accommodation, yet I had got the incredible experience of staying there. Staff management and food, all were unbelievable. Furthermore, we had got the free shuttle cab service to the airport while returning. We all were feeling jubilant and those were really great memories for us.
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Clark Heights in Cochin where I had
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a chance to stay last to last year during my winter excursion with my loving auntie & uncle. They
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Singapore and
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cochin
. Luckily they
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me along with them as we have a
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good
bonding with each other.

We went to Cochin by flight from Delhi. When we reached Cochin airport, we
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took
the taxi and
finally
headed towards the 5-star
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hotel
Clark Heights. As
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soon
as we reached the entrance gate, the helping staff rushed towards our taxi. They greet us
nicely
and
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took
our luggage and
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took
us to the receptionist who welcomed all of us with great hospitality and assigned us our
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rooms
. I
was astonished
to
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see
the extensive structure of the building. Each area in the
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hotel
was tidy.
Moreover
, we had
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spacious
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rooms
which were vibrant and
perfectly
decorated with the various paintings and flower pots.

Our
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rooms
had modern furniture, a huge T. V. and a
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small
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Refridgerator
. My
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also
had a large window overlooking a
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beautiful
garden.
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Room
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service
was incredible and was available for all 24 hours. The rooftop had a nice pool and SPA
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services
where
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people
could enjoy the massages
however
, they were at extra charges.
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Wifi
was free throughout the building. The
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hotel
had a variety of cuisines available 24 by 7 and in fact, whatever we ordered was delicious and had
been served
quickly
by the
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room
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service
staff. Apart from this, we had had the 3 complimentary breakfasts within the
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room
charges.
Basically
, it was a buffet with numerous items like juices, hot &
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cold
drinks, veg & non-veg items to fruits & puddings.

We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights. Although it was quite costly accommodation,
yet
I had
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got
the incredible experience of staying there. Staff management and food, all were unbelievable.
Furthermore
, we had
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got
the free shuttle cab
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service
to the airport while returning. We all were feeling jubilant and those were
really
great memories for us.
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IELTS essay Discuss a special hotel you stayed in. Where it is, what it is like, why you went there and how you felt about it?

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