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Imagine that a company plans to build an industry in your hometown. Discuss the factory might improve your community. Do you favour or oppose to build in your community. Give reasons and examples.

Imagine that a company plans to build an industry in your hometown. Discuss the factory might improve your community. Do you favour or oppose to build in your community. Give reasons and examples. Wyqga
Globalization requires the growth of factories in both urban and rural areas. It is argued in my hometown whether the industry should be built because of its long-term effect on the environment. However, I consider that the advantages that companies bring for locals would outweigh the disadvantage. This essay will discuss two following reasons for my choice with a concrete conclusion. On the one hand, industrialization contributes to the development of my hometown’s economy. In addition to the profit from agriculture, authorities should take advantage of building factories to expand the earnings. An illustration of this is that in 2020, my hometown's GDP is just approximately 20% but it is predicted that GDP might reach nearly 40% in 2021 with the advent of companies. However, if some locals still remained conventional thoughts about the industry, it would be more difficult for gaining a high economic rank, compared to other provinces and cities. On the other hand, building companies create a variety of jobs for the locals. To be honest, my neighbours could earn their livings just by working all day in vast open fields or by selling goods; the unemployment rate relatively increases in recent years. These problems could be solved by allowing to construct factories, they provide a wide range of works for not only the young but also the elder with stable income. Also, tackling unemployment will lead to the deduction of crime and social evil- hot-debated issues in my hometown in the present. In conclusion, I have a tendency to believe that factory construction would bring benefits to both economic and social. Nevertheless, some negatives effects such as polluted fumes into the air or water could be resolved by a strict ban from authorities. As a result, people should feel comfortable in industries and receive good opportunities to attain a high living standard in the near future.
Globalization requires the growth of
factories
in both urban and rural areas. It
is argued
in my hometown whether the industry should
be built
because
of its long-term effect on the environment.
However
, I consider that the advantages that
companies
bring for locals would outweigh the disadvantage. This essay will discuss two following reasons for my choice with a concrete conclusion.

On the one hand, industrialization contributes to the development of my hometown’s economy.
In addition
to the profit from agriculture, authorities should take advantage of building
factories
to expand the earnings. An illustration of this is that in 2020, my hometown's GDP is
just
approximately 20%
but
it
is predicted
that GDP might reach
nearly
40% in 2021 with the advent of
companies
.
However
, if
some
locals
still
remained conventional thoughts about the industry, it would be more difficult for gaining a high economic rank, compared to other provinces and cities.

On the other hand
, building
companies
create a variety of jobs for the locals. To be honest, my
neighbours
could earn their livings
just
by working all day in vast open fields or by selling
goods
; the unemployment rate
relatively
increases in recent years. These problems could
be solved
by allowing to construct
factories
, they provide a wide range of works for not
only
the young
but
also
the elder with stable income.
Also
, tackling unemployment will lead to the deduction of crime and social evil- hot-debated issues in my hometown in the present.

In conclusion
, I have a tendency to believe that
factory
construction would bring benefits to both economic and social.
Nevertheless
,
some
negatives effects such as polluted fumes into the air or water could
be resolved
by a strict ban from authorities.
As a result
,
people
should feel comfortable in industries and receive
good
opportunities to attain a high living standard in the near future.
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IELTS essay Imagine that a company plans to build an industry in your hometown. Discuss the factory might improve your community. Do you favour or oppose to build in your community. Give reasons and examples.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
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