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Discrimination against the LGBT community

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Inequality of The LGBT Community Should Not Appear in The Society Dear parents, When first hearing the word “equality” what comes to mind? In terms of ethics as well as actual standards of a person. Do you really understand that equality is the equal status, rights and opportunities that every citizen must have at birth? Our basic human rights should not be violated due to certain race, religion or sex. In fact, a recent Australian equality survey of LGBT people found that discrimination was the number one concern among respondents. The above-identified discrimination law gaps should be filled as soon as possible. Historically, homosexual, someone who sexually attracted to people of the same sex, have always been discriminated against. Over the past time, homosexuals have protested and fought for their equality. On the contrary, how are they perceived by the society? Is this what they want to receive from society? Imagine one day your child is also a part of the LGBT community? How do you feel? And what are you going to do to deal with that harsh truth hitting your face? Before answering these questions. Today, let us take a moment to sit down, to think, to reflect and reconsider together and focus on rationality by highlighting the idea of equal rights for LGBT individuals. Firstly, the corrupt discrimination against people in the LGBT community should not exist in this civilized society in any way. According to Relationship Australia NSW, bullying is a big problem for LGBT people. WOW! It was like a direct slap in my face. About six out of 10 people have endured verbal ridicule and abuse, with two out of 10 admitting to physical assault. Discrimination in the workplace still affects LGBT people, although it has been completely illegal across Australia in 2013. How would you feel if you were treated like this? It is a common problem that everyone deserves to be treated equally. The Constitution calls it 'the obvious'. Why am I being unfairly discriminated against because of my gender? Indeed, one in 10 LGBT employees actually quit their job after they were made to feel unwelcome, and half of these people feel they have to try to keep their sexual orientation a secret at work through fear of discrimination. People can often feel pressured to fit in with societal conventions of being male or female. People who do not fit the pattern can be ridiculed, intimidated, and even physically abused. Is it their fault when they are born with a different gender from everyone in society? As part of the LGBT community, I bravely tell you that it does not matter who you are and what your gender is? It is just what you can do to make your life and society more beautiful. Despite increasing acceptance of LGBT people in society and greater visibility in the media and public life, many LGBT people are still subjected to discrimination, harassment, and violence at workplaces, schools, and in social situations. It is unbelievable that many LGBT people report surprisingly well dealing with systemic discrimination well and are susceptibility to depression or any other mental health condition. However, long-term experiences of discrimination and stigmatisation can lead to a higher likelihood of emotional distress, depression, and anxiety. I stand here to ask you, is an act of emotional torture against another person affecting their mental health considered unlawful behaviour? Whether they have held responsible for this misconduct before the law or just an apology that must be made? Are those people who commit the above acts take responsibility for this misconduct before the law or just an apology that must be made? Secondly, LGBT people, especially those still searching for their identities, may experience a variety of different emotions and thoughts as they try to capture their emotions. Therefore, as parents, you should think thoroughly, understand and sympathise with your children as well as support them mentally, protect and empower them in all circumstances. No one can choose their gender; let them be themselves. Considering they are trying to cope with their own emotions, LGBT people can often find themselves facing the reactions and opinions of family and friends, not to mention workplace and social issues. PLEASE. . . PLEASE. . . PLEASE Parents! Do not be the last person in that rotten feudal society - you do not want to be old fashioned in your community! Generally, such problems can take the form of bullying, discrimination, feelings of isolation, fear of reactions, or pressure that materialises when “coming out. ” Relationship and family problems can often arise in the LGBT community. LGBT people are at a much greater risk of becoming depressed or feeling anxious compared with other genders. If we do not change soon, all the LGBT people will hurt themselves more and more! Don't you see how dangerous it would be to continue being discriminated against? Eventually, due to what society says and does, LGBT people are more likely to experience depression and anxiety. The good news is that the government has committed to raising awareness about these issues and helping reduce the stigma facing the LGBT community. Movember Foundation has launched a national campaign to increase understanding of the Australian community about discrimination and its impact on the mental health of the LGBT community. It is designed to remind people to stop discrimination, to think about how the comments you make can cause real suffering and harm, to respect those who are different from you. When I was a child, I also had to endure limitless mockery from my friends at school. It made me stronger, more mature, and made me find my own identity. I do not hesitate to tell you that I am a part of the LGBT community. However, the parental barrier is too great, as we do not have the opportunity to openly embrace who we are, as well as get accepted by the family. Try putting yourself into their shoes is it really wrong if you love someone of the same sex? Is your heart wanting a person of the same sex that you have feelings for is really wrong? Please listen to my voice, even once, what I have said, then reflect on it and open your mind to welcome us, we are part of the LGBT community!
Inequality of The LGBT
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Community
Should Not Appear in The Society

Dear parents,

When
first
hearing the word
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“equality”
what
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comes
to mind? In terms of ethics as
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well
as actual standards of a
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person
. Do you
really
understand that
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equality
is the equal status, rights and opportunities that every citizen
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must
have at birth? Our basic human rights should not
be violated
due to certain race, religion or
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sex
. In fact, a recent Australian
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equality
survey of LGBT
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people
found that
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discrimination
was the number one concern among respondents. The above-identified
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discrimination
law gaps should
be filled
as
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soon
as possible.
Historically
, homosexual, someone
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who
sexually
attracted to
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people
of the same
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sex
, have always
been discriminated
against. Over the
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past time
, homosexuals have protested and fought for their
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equality
.
On the contrary
, how are they perceived by the
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society
? Is this what they want to receive from
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society
? Imagine one day your child is
also
a
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part
of the LGBT
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community
? How do you
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feel
? And what are you going to do to deal with that harsh truth hitting your face?
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Before
answering these questions.
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Today
,
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let
us take a moment to sit down, to
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think
, to reflect and reconsider together and focus on rationality by highlighting the
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idea
of equal rights for LGBT individuals.

Firstly
, the corrupt
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discrimination
against
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people
in the LGBT
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community
should not exist in this civilized
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society
in any way. According to Relationship Australia NSW, bullying is a
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big
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problem
for LGBT
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people
. WOW! It was like a direct slap in my face. About six out of 10
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people
have endured verbal ridicule and abuse, with two out of 10 admitting to physical assault.
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Discrimination
in the workplace
still
affects LGBT
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people
, although it has been completely illegal across Australia in 2013. How would you
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feel
if you
were treated
like this? It is a common
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problem
that everyone deserves to
be treated
equally
. The Constitution calls it 'the obvious'. Why am I being
unfairly
discriminated against
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because
of my gender?

Indeed
, one in 10 LGBT employees actually quit their job after they
were made
to
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feel
unwelcome, and half of these
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people
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feel
they
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have to
try to
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keep
their sexual orientation a secret at work through fear of
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discrimination
.
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People
can
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often
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feel
pressured to fit in with societal conventions of being male or female.
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People
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who
do not fit the pattern can
be ridiculed
, intimidated, and even
physically
abused. Is it their fault when they
are born
with a
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different
gender from everyone in
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society
? As
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part
of the LGBT
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community
, I
bravely
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tell
you that it does not matter
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who
you are and what your gender is? It is
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just
what you can do to
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make
your life and
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society
more
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beautiful
.

Despite increasing acceptance of LGBT
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people
in
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society
and greater visibility in the media and public life,
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many
LGBT
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people
are
still
subjected to
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discrimination
, harassment, and violence at workplaces, schools, and in social situations. It is unbelievable that
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many
LGBT
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people
report
surprisingly
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well
dealing with systemic
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discrimination
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well
and are susceptibility to depression or any other mental health condition.

However
, long-term experiences of
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discrimination
and
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stigmatisation
can lead to a higher likelihood of emotional distress, depression, and anxiety. I stand here to ask you, is an act of emotional torture against another
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person
affecting their mental health considered

unlawful
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behaviour
? Whether they have held responsible for this misconduct
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before
the law or
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just
an apology that
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must
be made
? Are those
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people
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who
commit the above acts take responsibility for this misconduct
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before
the law or
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just
an apology that
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must
be made
?

Secondly
, LGBT
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people
,
especially
those
still
searching for their identities, may experience a variety of
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different
emotions and thoughts as they try to capture their emotions.
Therefore
, as parents, you should
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think
thoroughly
, understand and
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sympathise
with your children as
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well
as support them mentally, protect and empower them in all circumstances. No one can choose their gender;
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let
them be themselves.

Considering they are trying to cope with their
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own
emotions, LGBT
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people
can
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often
find themselves facing the reactions and opinions of family and friends, not to mention workplace and social issues.
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PLEASE
.
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.
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PLEASE
Parents! Do not be the last
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person
in that rotten feudal
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society
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
you do not want to be
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old fashioned
in your community!

Generally
, such
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problems
can take the form of bullying,
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discrimination
, feelings of isolation, fear of reactions, or pressure that
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materialises
when “coming out. ” Relationship and family
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problems
can
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often
arise in the LGBT
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community
. LGBT
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people
are at a much greater
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risk
of becoming depressed or feeling anxious compared with other genders. If we do not
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change
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soon
, all the LGBT
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people
will hurt themselves more and more! Don't you
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see
how
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dangerous
it would be to continue
being discriminated
against?

Eventually
, due to what
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society
says and does, LGBT
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people
are more likely to experience depression and anxiety. The
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good
news is that the
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government
has committed to raising awareness about these issues and helping
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reduce
the stigma facing the LGBT
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community
.
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Movember
Foundation has launched a national campaign to increase understanding of the Australian
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community
about
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discrimination
and its impact on the mental health of the LGBT
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community
. It
is designed
to remind
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people
to
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stop
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discrimination
, to
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think
about how the comments you
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make
can cause real suffering and harm, to respect those
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who
are
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different
from you.

When I was a child, I
also
had to endure limitless mockery from my friends at school. It made me stronger, more mature, and made me find my
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own
identity. I do not hesitate to
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tell
you that I am a
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part
of the LGBT
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community
.
However
, the parental barrier is too great, as we do not have the opportunity to
openly
embrace
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who
we are, as
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well
as
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get
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accepted
by the family. Try putting yourself into their shoes is it
really
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wrong
if you
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love
someone of the same
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sex
? Is your heart wanting a
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person
of the same
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sex
that you have feelings for is
really
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wrong
?
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Please
listen to my voice, even once, what I have said, then reflect on it and open your mind to welcome us, we are
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part
of the LGBT
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community
!
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IELTS essay Discrimination against the LGBT community

Essay
  American English
11 paragraphs
1054 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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