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The number of individuals pursuing their higher education after school has also increased, along with courses with a wider range of applications is now available at universities and colleges.

The number of individuals pursuing their higher education after school has also increased, along with courses with a wider range of applications is now available at universities and colleges. 1nN9n
Throughout the 21st century, many new universities have been built around the globe. The number of individuals pursuing their higher education after school has also increased, along with courses with a wider range of applications is now available at universities and colleges. I think it is a positive trait for this sort of development. To start with, the pupil who is ready to acquire their knowledge from particular courses have more flexible timing, and a range of choices of courses from universities. For instance, the graduate who has a financially backward situation can obtain the low budget course for their achievement. Additionally, the growth of these students will make a massive impact on the economic status of the country. Likewise, it is a boon for future generations to have a nourishing environment. Moreover, it decreases the crime rate in society and well being. For example, the corruption rate is declining, meanwhile the literacy rate has marked its line on the peak. This shows that education has changed several activities in society. In conclusion, though many countries lack education development, the positive development of this profound education system outweighs the negative.
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many
new universities have
been built
around the globe. The number of individuals pursuing their higher
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education
after school has
also
increased, along with
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courses
with a wider range of applications is
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now
available at universities and colleges. I
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think
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positive
trait for this sort of development.

To
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start
with, the pupil who is ready to acquire their knowledge from particular
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courses
have more flexible timing, and a range of choices of
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courses
from universities.
For instance
, the graduate who has a
financially
backward situation can obtain the low budget
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course
for their achievement.

Additionally
, the growth of these students will
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make
a massive impact on the economic status of the country.
Likewise
, it is a boon for future generations to have a nourishing environment.
Moreover
, it decreases the crime rate in society and
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well being
.
For example
, the corruption rate is declining, meanwhile the literacy rate has marked its line on the peak. This
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shows
that
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education
has
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changed
several activities in society.

In conclusion
, though
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many
countries lack
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education
development, the
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positive
development of this profound
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education
system outweighs the
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IELTS essay The number of individuals pursuing their higher education after school has also increased, along with courses with a wider range of applications is now available at universities and colleges.

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