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Digital technology helps to share daily activities on social media. Is it positive development or negative development.

Digital technology helps to share daily activities on social media. Is it positive development or negative development. KnR5k
Advancement in technology paves the way of information as excessive amount of current affairs related news are available on social media. While this trend has a minor negative on individuals life, it is proved to be beneficial exceedingly. Reasons behind my arguments are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs. To engender with, certainty, owing to counterfeit news, people learn something wrong. This will harm their career, since fake news do not have a true moral itself. For example, it was posted on instagram in India that some terrorists were planning to expose a bomb in rural area of Mumbai, hence residents immediately sifted their houses and things in another area. Nevertheless, after given time period, there was not a single bomb exposed. Certainly, people devote that kind of news in order to make a large amount of followers and popularity. Although, lone news may lead masses mind in an inappropriate way, not all posts have wrong intentions to spread fake news. Eminent users on facebook have been allocating informations about current scenario be it, Covid-19 or progression of developing country. Consequently, people who cannot afford to get news about what is going on surroundings at daily basis. For instance, prior to a week, I was reeling to an article regarding to a health crisis in the world. Over there, I read that in India, the cases of Coivd-19 are surging drastically, thus maximum care should be taken by denizens of India by the sake to maintain well-being. Later on, it resulted positive on me when I went to a crowed place, since my present over there must be required. When I tested my self whether I got covid positive or negative, results are negatives because of the usage of masks and hand sensitiser frequently. I knew this because of that news I read form google. Moreover, similarly to previous merit to follow daily activities on social media, it would be essential to fulfil unemployment of capable masses. Since there are daily employment opportunities are being posted, individuals get to know and apply on that, ultimately they would satisfy their need to enjoy their life to the fullest. Also, evolvement of a particular nation is maintained to best as it gives a chance to cope with work to many people. In conclusion, seeing daily news on social networks is essential when it comes to know about current scenario and know about different available jobs. However, that genres of news should be fake as it can attract people in an inappropriate way.
Advancement in technology paves the way of information as excessive amount of
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current
affairs related
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news
are available on social media. While this trend has a minor
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negative
on
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individuals
life, it
is proved
to be beneficial
exceedingly
. Reasons behind my arguments
are discussed
in the ensuing paragraphs.

To engender with, certainty, owing to counterfeit
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news
,
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people
learn something
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wrong
. This will harm their career, since fake
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news
do not have a true moral itself.
For example
, it
was posted
on
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instagram
in India that
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some
terrorists were planning to expose a bomb in rural area of Mumbai,
hence
residents immediately sifted their
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houses
and things in another area.
Nevertheless
, after
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given
time period, there was not a single bomb exposed.
Certainly
,
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people
devote that kind of
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news
in order to
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make
a large amount of followers and popularity.

Although, lone
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news
may lead masses mind
Consider replacing "in an inappropriate way" with the adverb for "inappropriate"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an inappropriate way
, not all posts have
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wrong
intentions to spread fake
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news
. Eminent users on
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facebook
have been allocating
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informations
about
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current
scenario be it, Covid-19 or progression of
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developing country
.
Consequently
,
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people
who cannot afford to
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get
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news
about what is going on surroundings at
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daily
basis.
For instance
, prior to a week, I was reeling to an article
The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".
regarding to
a health crisis in the world. Over there, I read that in India, the cases of Coivd-19 are surging
drastically
,
thus
maximum care should
be taken
by denizens of India by the sake to maintain well-being. Later on, it resulted
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
on me when I went to a crowed place, since my present over there
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must
be required
. When I
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tested
my self whether I
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got
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covid
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positive
or
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negative
, results are negatives
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because
of the usage of masks and hand
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sensitiser
frequently
. I knew this
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because
of that
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news
I read form google.

Moreover
,
similarly
to previous merit to follow
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daily
activities on social media, it would be essential to fulfil unemployment of capable masses. Since there are
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daily
employment opportunities are
being posted
, individuals
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get
to know and apply on that,
ultimately
they would satisfy their need to enjoy their life to the fullest.
Also
,
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evolvement
of a particular nation
is maintained
to best as it gives a chance to cope with work to
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many
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people
.

In conclusion
, seeing
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daily
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news
on social networks is essential when it
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comes
to know about
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current
scenario and know about
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different
available jobs.
However
, that genres of
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news
should be fake as it can attract
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people
Consider replacing "in an inappropriate way" with the adverb for "inappropriate"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an inappropriate way
.
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IELTS essay Digital technology helps to share daily activities on social media. Is it positive development or negative development.

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