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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Nations across the world are going to face significant challenges in coming years because of the environmental issues, rising population and the challenges of providing quality education. Firstly, the essay would discussing the significant challenges which may arise in next ten years in India secondly, it would be discussing the possible solutions. Being the second most populated country in the world with a significant population growth rate and with limited resources, India is going to face significant challenges in accommodating and providing housing, employment and quality education to the last person. Global warming is going to increase the sea levels and the coastal cities such as Mumbai, Kolkata and Chennai are going to bear the brunt. Today, one fifth of the children completing primary education in rural India from a government run schools are unable to read and write, and are having difficulty in solving basic mathematical calculations. Rising population can be controlled by providing better resources for family planning and increasing the incoming of the people falling below poverty line. The pressure on coastal cities can be eased by developing many smaller/smart cities and alternative hubs of employment in other parts of the country. Also, strengthening of independent bodies such as NGT can curb the damage inflicted on environment by industries and individuals. The biggest of all has been the struggle of the government in providing quality education to all, however, government can allow private players to operate schools on behalf of the government and can turn the tide. At the end, we can conclude that, family planning, increase in income of the people below poverty, smart cities, strong regulatory bodies such as NGT and private players in schools can be a few of the steps to handles the challenges of the problems in next ten years.
Nations across the world are going to face
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challenges
in coming years
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because
of the environmental issues, rising population and the
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challenges
of providing quality
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education
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discussing
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significant
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challenges
which may arise in
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ten years in India
secondly
, it would be discussing the possible solutions.

Being the second most populated country in the world with a
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significant
population growth rate and with limited resources, India is going to face
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significant
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challenges
in accommodating and providing housing, employment and quality
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education
to the last person. Global warming is going to increase the sea levels and the coastal
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cities
such as Mumbai, Kolkata and Chennai are going to bear the brunt.
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Today
, one fifth of the children completing primary
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education
in rural India from a
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government
run schools are unable to read and write, and are having difficulty in solving basic mathematical calculations.

Rising population can
be controlled
by providing better resources for family planning and increasing the incoming of the
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people
falling below poverty line. The pressure on coastal
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cities
can be
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eased
by developing
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smaller/smart
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cities
and alternative hubs of employment in other parts of the country.
Also
, strengthening of independent bodies such as
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NGT
can curb the damage inflicted on environment by industries and individuals. The biggest of all has been the struggle of the
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government
in providing quality
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education
to all,
however
,
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government
can
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allow
private players to operate schools on behalf of the
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government
and can turn the tide.

At the
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end
, we can conclude that, family planning, increase in income of the
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people
below poverty, smart
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cities
, strong regulatory bodies such as
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NGT
and private players in schools can be a few of the steps to
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handles
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of the problems in
next
ten years.
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IELTS essay Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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