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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. qdbw
Nowadays personal life of politicians is printed in papers which left no information disclosed to the public. I completely agree with the statement that it should not be published and must be avoided. These publishing effects ones' personal life as well as their political career. Politician and their family are always followed by the reporters which affect their personal space and relationships. Press reporters go after them everywhere and leave no privacy which can cause inconvenience to the family members who are not comfortable with media. For instance, children aging between 5-15 have tender age are conscious of their appearances will feel uncomfortable of reporters following them each time. Therefore, bond between family members is distressed and might have severe outcomes. With continuous disclosing of private life, political career can be badly affected. People will start judging an individual based on incidents happening in private life, which cause a decline in career. Public will create a negative image in their mind and will think that politician is also not good in his or her work. For example, US ex-president Donald Trump faced a lot of criticism due to news published with regards to his relationship with wife. Hence, the events in private life directly affect the career which is not justifiable. In conclusion, newspapers should not print Politicians' personal life. This can results harm their personal relationship with family, spouse and children. Also, it severely affects their political career as people create a bad image in mind and reach accordingly.
Nowadays
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personal
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life
of politicians
is printed
in papers which
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left
no information disclosed to the public. I completely
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agree
with the statement that it should not
be published
and
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must
be avoided
. These publishing effects ones'
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personal
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life
as well
as their political career.

Politician and their
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family
are always followed by the reporters which affect their
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personal
space and relationships. Press reporters go after them everywhere and
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leave
no privacy which can cause inconvenience to the
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family
members who are not comfortable with media.
For instance
, children aging between 5-15 have tender age are conscious of their appearances will feel uncomfortable of reporters following them each time.
Therefore
, bond between
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family
members
is distressed
and might have severe outcomes.

With continuous disclosing of private
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life
, political
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career
can be
badly
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affected
.
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People
will
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start
judging an individual based on incidents happening in private
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life
, which cause a decline in
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career
. Public will create a
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negative
image in their mind and will
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think
that politician is
also
not
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good
in
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his or her
work.
For example
, US ex-president Donald Trump faced
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a lot of
criticism due to news published
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with regards to
his relationship with wife.
Hence
, the
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events
in private
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life
directly
affect the
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career
which is not justifiable.

In conclusion
, newspapers should not print Politicians'
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personal
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life
. This can
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results
harm their
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personal
relationship with
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family
, spouse and children.
Also
, it
severely
affects their political
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career
as
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people
create a
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bad
image in mind and reach
accordingly
.
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IELTS essay Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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