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Destruction of forests may put the world to an end. Do you agree?

Destruction of forests may put the world to an end. Do you agree? 15A0q
Urbanization and overpopulation is now asking for more and more land for the human beings to survive on. For this, trees and forests are being cut down to make way for large buildings and urban population to reside in. Although, forests give life to earth, their existence is neglected. Trees, Plants and even small shoots are used for fruits, vegetables and also medicinal purposes since medieval times. Further, they provide rubber, paper, fuel and even wood for furniture. Most importantly, trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and release oxygen for humans to breathe and thus purifying the air. Now, obviously, due to a decrease in the forests, the amount of carbon dioxide will increase in the atmosphere destroying the ozone layer, ice caps will melt, increased sea level, sea animals dying and much more natural disasters like typhoon, cyclone, drought, famine, flood and storms. Forests are indeed a shelter to all the wildlife and a reduction in them will eventually cause an extinction in animals causing an imbalance in ecological cycle by disturbing the food chain. Forests also help in formation of clouds and bringing rainfall, hence, cooling the temperature. Above all, forests beautify the nature, preserve the environment and even bring a large source of income as a tourist destination. For example, Amazon Forest is the world’s most visited rainforest inviting millions of tourists and provides 20% of the world’s oxygen by stabilizing the earth’s climate. It is considered the oldest yet the home to half the Earth’s species. Thus, I believe that by cutting down forests we are stopping all the positive activities done by the forests in the favour of human and environment and inviting more climate imbalance, increasing global warming and finally extinction. Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
Urbanization and overpopulation is
now
asking for more and more land for the human beings to survive on. For this, trees and
forests
are being
cut
down to
make
way for large buildings and urban population to reside in.

Although,
forests
give life to earth, their existence
is neglected
. Trees, Plants and even
small
shoots are
used
for fruits, vegetables and
also
medicinal purposes since medieval times.
Further
, they provide rubber, paper, fuel and even wood for furniture. Most
importantly
, trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and release oxygen for humans to breathe and
thus
purifying the air.
Now
,
obviously
, due to a decrease in the
forests
, the amount of carbon dioxide will increase in the atmosphere destroying the ozone layer, ice caps will melt, increased sea level, sea animals dying and much more natural disasters like typhoon, cyclone, drought, famine, flood and storms.

Forests are
indeed
a shelter to all the wildlife and a reduction in them will
eventually
cause an extinction in animals causing an imbalance in ecological cycle by disturbing the food chain.
Forests
also
help
in formation of clouds and bringing rainfall,
hence
, cooling the temperature.
Above all
,
forests
beautify the nature, preserve the environment and even bring a large source of income as a tourist destination.
For example
, Amazon
Forest
is the world’s most visited rainforest inviting millions of tourists and provides 20% of the world’s oxygen by stabilizing the earth’s climate. It
is considered
the oldest
yet
the home to half the Earth’s species.

Thus
, I believe that by cutting down
forests
we are stopping all the
positive
activities done by the
forests
in the
favour
of human and environment and inviting more climate imbalance, increasing global warming and
finally
extinction.

Environmental problems are serious in
many
countries. It means that the
only
possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you
agree
or disagree?
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IELTS essay Destruction of forests may put the world to an end. Do you agree?

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5 paragraphs
320 words
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