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Despite a large number of evs.& sedentary lifestyle is gaining populanty in the confempotary world what are the problems Whal solutions can you sugges

Despite a large number of evs. & sedentary lifestyle is gaining populanty in the confempotary world what are the problems Whal solutions can you sugges 6pmbl
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TASK-2 pearl which
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Health is
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activites
and life style
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people
choose to remain at their bed playing
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Jame etc in their five times. Individuals living such life style dive to
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learious
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chmoly
a
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good
advancements leads to
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different
membered.
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ferablems
.
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would like to
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dia
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barious
problems and their solutions in forthcoming
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perez
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increase


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office

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onsoles
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, the
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people
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inactive and calls plunk food all the day
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it is tasteful
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ickly
made and
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mort
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quich
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lead
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hailets
leads to the less
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inubrevents
in the body and more health problems.
For example
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neves
publish that obesity is
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becomi
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inteleen
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of the lifestyle
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IELTS essay Despite a large number of evs. & sedentary lifestyle is gaining populanty in the confempotary world what are the problems Whal solutions can you sugges

Essay
  American English
22 paragraphs
171 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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