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THE PLANS BELOW SHOW THE LAYOUT OF A UNIVERSITY'S SPORTS CENTRE NOW, AND HOW IT WILL LOOK AFTER REDEVELOPMENT.

THE PLANS BELOW SHOW THE LAYOUT OF A UNIVERSITY'S SPORTS CENTRE NOW, AND HOW IT WILL LOOK AFTER REDEVELOPMENT. a8QnP

The two plans illustrate the settlement of a university's sports centre at the moment and the proposed plan in the future. Overall, it can be seen the complex is planned to undergo significant changes regarding the size and recreational Facilities. At present, there are two outdoor courts in both East side and west side. There is a pool which has 25m in the middle of sports centre, and the north of this area is surrounded by the gym, south reception, we changing room an east seating. The future plus shows some changes. Gym that places north side will widening, the outdoor counts will removed and added two dance studios in east side, one changing room in souteast side and a cafe in south side. It is planned sports hall placed to the midst of these uses. Moreover, the outdoor courts where in west side, is transformed with leisure pool and added in the south side of charging room and Sports shop.

The two plans illustrate the settlement of a university's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 at the moment and the proposed plan in the future.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 the complex is planned
 to undergo significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 regarding the size and recreational Facilities.

At present, there are two outdoor courts in both East side and west side. There is a pool which has Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "25 m"25 m
25m
 in the middle of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, and the north of this area is surrounded
 by the gym, south reception, Did you mean "we're changing", "we are changing", or "we were changing"?we're changingwe are changingwe were changing
we changing
 room an east seating.

The future plus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. Gym that places north side will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "widen"widen
widening
, the outdoor counts will removed and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 two dance studios in east side, one changing room in Possible spelling mistake found.southeastSoutheast
souteast
 side and a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 in south side. It is planned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall placed to the midst of these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
. Moreover
, the outdoor courts where in west side, is transformed
 with leisure pool and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the south side of charging room and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
 shop. 