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descriptive essays about a film character

descriptive essays about a film character 7ao25

Firstly, Monica is a fairly beautiful woman. Both her face and physical appearance quite good. She has got gorgeous blue eyes, black hair and perfect lips. Additionally, her physics is so good that everything that she wears fits her. For instance, while she has a date with a guy, she wears a satin dress or another perfect dress. When she goes to work, she generally wears a blouse over a skirt or pants, but sometimes she wears casual clothes. Secondly, she is quite sensitive about her friendships. She always supports her friends, gives them plausible advice, and cooks their favorite foods. If they want apple pie, she cooks it immediately. Sometimes she falls out with her friends because of special reasons, but they always make peace. What is more, she is also sensitive about herself because her mother always puts down Monica. She continually dislikes Monica's features and makes comments about them. For example, when she comes to Monica's home, she makes comments about Monica's home or hair. Her mother does not realize Monica's feelings, but she hurts her daughter so much. However, Monica loves her mother despite her sayings. Lastly, being a chief is Monica's dream job. She always tries to realize her dream, but it is not easy to achieve. Sometimes she has troubles with her jobs, or she has to quit her steady jobs because of various reasons. Despite all these facts, she does not give up her dreams easily. She tries to do something else such as doing funeral or wedding foods, but in the end, she realizes her dream by means of a man. He gives a chance to Monica as a chief, and she succeeds.

Firstly
, Monica is a fairly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 woman. Both her face and physical appearance quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. She has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 gorgeous blue eyes, black hair and perfect lips. Additionally
, her physics is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 that everything that she You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwear and tear
wears
 fits her. For instance
, while she has a date with a guy, she You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwear and tear
wears
 a satin dress or another perfect dress. When she goes to work, she generally
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwear and tear
wears
 a blouse over a skirt or pants, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 she You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwear and tear
wears
 casual clothes.

Secondly
, she is quite sensitive about her friendships. She always supports her friends, gives them plausible advice, and cooks their favorite foods. If they want apple pie, she cooks it immediately. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 she falls out with her friends This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of special reasons, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 peace. What is more
, she is also
 sensitive about herself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 her mother always puts down Monica. She continually
 dislikes Monica's features and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 comments about them. For example
, when she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to Monica's home, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 comments about Monica's home or hair. Her mother does not realize Monica's feelings, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she hurts her daughter This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much. However
, Monica This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiresadores
loves
 her mother despite her sayings.

Lastly
, being a chief is Monica's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
 job. She always tries to realize her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is not easy to achieve. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 she has troubles with her jobs, or she This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 quit her steady jobs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of various reasons. Despite all these facts, she does not give up her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dreams
easily
. She tries to do something else such as doing funeral or wedding foods, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, she realizes her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
 by means of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
. He gives a chance to Monica as a chief, and she succeeds. 