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Describle a book tha you enjoyed reading. You should say

Describle a book tha you enjoyed reading. You should say m20qA
The book Dac Nhan Tam is divided into 4 parts by the author. Each part is a lesson as well as a secret of its own. The content of part 1 of the book Dac Nhan Tam will share experiences, lessons and even notes in dealing with relationships. Next, part 2 of the book will introduce you to 6 ways to create goodwill with others. Help them love and respect you. Part 3 is considered to give you the most lessons. Those are the ways you can guide other people's thoughts to your own. To do so, you just need to follow the rules. Part 4 is that transforming other people is extremely difficult. Because how can help transform without causing disputes or resentment. The book has changed the lives of many. It helps me look more positive, know how to communicate
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parts
by the author. Each
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part
is a lesson
as well
as a secret of its
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own
.

The content of
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part
1 of the
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book
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Dac
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Nhan
Tam will share experiences, lessons and even notes in dealing with relationships.
Next
,
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part
2 of the
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book
will introduce you to 6 ways to create goodwill with others.
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Help
them
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love
and respect you.
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Part
3
is considered
to give you the most lessons. Those are the ways you can guide other
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people
's thoughts to your
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own
. To do
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so
, you
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just
need to follow the
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rules
.
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Part
4 is that transforming other
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people
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is
extremely
difficult.
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Because
how can
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help
transform without causing disputes or resentment. The
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book
has
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changed
the
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lives
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many
. It
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helps
me look more
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positive
, know how to
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communicate

IELTS essay Describle a book tha you enjoyed reading. You should say

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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