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Describing your hometown and comparing your city with another one

Describing your hometown and comparing your city with another one 0wK65
My home town, Hue, is located in central Vietnam. Hue is a beautiful place with a lot of Pagodas such as Thien Mu Pagoda, Tu Hieu Pagoda. In the past, Hue was the Capital of Vietnam. People usually call Citadel Hue so it has an Imperial City. The weather in Hue is usually rainy all the year round. Hue is famous for Street foods, for example, Bun hen, Banh Khoai, so on. Hue is hotter than HCM city. and it's less crowded than HCM City
My home town,
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Hue
,
is located
in central Vietnam.
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Hue
is a
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beautiful
place with
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a lot of
Pagodas such as
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Thien
Mu Pagoda, Tu
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Hieu
Pagoda. In the past,
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Hue
was the Capital of Vietnam.
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People
usually
call Citadel
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Hue
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so
it has an Imperial City.

The weather in
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Hue
is
usually
rainy all the year round.
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Hue
is
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famous
for Street foods,
for example
, Bun hen,
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Banh
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Khoai
,
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on.

Hue is hotter than
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HCM
city.
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and
it's less crowded than
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HCM
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City

IELTS essay Describing your hometown and comparing your city with another one

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
84 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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