Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Describe your town where you was born

Describe your town where you was born kYpPd
My town called "Jumashuy". I love "Jumashuy" town, because, I was born there and my childhood passed there. My town located on east of Uzbekistan. I adore my city very much. In my natureland now is building a lot of shops, Educational centers, hospitals with modern, comfortable instruments to people. I did not remember which buildings there are before, because I was young but I think it was build 10 years ago. I love my birth place, because I was born and risen here. Somehow I feel here good. In "Jumashuy" autumn is beautiful and spring too. I recomend visit to my city.
My town called
"
Jumashuy
"
. I
love
"
Jumashuy
"
town,
because
, I
was born
there and my childhood passed there. My town located on east of Uzbekistan. I adore my city
very
much.

In my
natureland
now
is building
a lot of
shops, Educational centers, hospitals with modern, comfortable instruments to
people
. I did not remember which buildings there are
before
,
because
I was young
but
I
think
it was build 10 years ago.

I
love
my birth place,
because
I
was born
and risen here. Somehow I feel here
good
.

In
"
Jumashuy
"
autumn is
beautiful
and spring too. I
recomend
visit to my city.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Describe your town where you was born

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
103 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts