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Describe your town where you was born

Describe your town where you was born kYpPd
My town called "Jumashuy". I love "Jumashuy" town, because, I was born there and my childhood passed there. My town located on east of Uzbekistan. I adore my city very much. In my natureland now is building a lot of shops, Educational centers, hospitals with modern, comfortable instruments to people. I did not remember which buildings there are before, because I was young but I think it was build 10 years ago. I love my birth place, because I was born and risen here. Somehow I feel here good. In "Jumashuy" autumn is beautiful and spring too. I recomend visit to my city.
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natureland
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is building
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a lot of
shops, Educational centers, hospitals with modern, comfortable instruments to
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people
. I did not remember which buildings there are
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before
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because
I was young
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but
I
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think
it was build 10 years ago.

I
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love
my birth place,
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because
I
was born
and risen here. Somehow I feel here
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good
.

In
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Jumashuy
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autumn is
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beautiful
and spring too. I
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recomend
visit to my city.
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IELTS essay Describe your town where you was born

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
103 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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