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My favorite teacher is Miss Hanh, my high school English teacher. She has a slim figure, short hair and cat-eye glasses. I am really impressed with her casual dress style but always attract others. She is a funny, responsible and dedicated teacher. Although she is not the homeroom teacher, she always cares about my class, like a second mother. Whenever we have problems, she is always willing to listen and give the most sincere advice. Of all the teachers I’ve met, s. Hanh is probably the most diligent and dedicated. Her lessons are very engaging, mostly because of the novel approach she adopted for each problem and her ability to simplify even the most complicated issues. It is actually this teacher that I have to thank for my love of english.
My favorite
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, my high school English
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. She has a slim figure, short hair and cat-eye glasses. I am
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impressed with her casual dress style
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always attract others. She is a
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, responsible and dedicated
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. Although she is not the homeroom
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, she always cares about my
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, like a second mother. Whenever we have problems, she is always willing to listen and give
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the most sincere
advice. Of all the
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engaging,
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of the novel approach she adopted for each problem and her ability to simplify even the most complicated issues. It is actually this
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IELTS essay describe your favourite teacher

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