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Describe your favorite book

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Frankly speaking, I don’t read much. Not that I don’t like reading, it’s just that I don’t have enough time to read on a regular basis. One of the books that I have recently read is called try in whirlpool by an author called Mohammad Reza PorMohammad. It is a thick factual and an unputdownable book that was published in 1996. The story revolves around a young boy who has to come to Tehran in order to work. He wants to be a teacher in the feature so he should educate. He tries more to do both of these processes at the same time. In this way he failed many times but he doesn’t disappoint and finally he can achieve his goal. It had a profound impact on my outlook on life. I guess this book will appeal to anyone who can’t find the solution in tough situations and disappointed.
Frankly
speaking, I don’t read much. Not that I don’t like reading, it’s
just
that I don’t have
enough
time to read on a regular basis. One of the books that I have recently read
is called
try in whirlpool by an author called Mohammad Reza
PorMohammad
.

It is a thick factual and an
unputdownable
book that
was published
in 1996. The story revolves around a young boy who
has to
come
to Tehran in order to work. He wants to be a teacher in the feature
so
he should educate. He tries more to do both of these processes at the same time. In this way he failed
many
times
but
he doesn’t disappoint and
finally
he can achieve his goal.

It had a profound impact on my outlook on life. I guess this book will appeal to anyone who can’t find the solution in tough situations and disappointed.
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IELTS essay Describe your favorite book

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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