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Describe what you think would be the perfect job for you

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For me, the ideal job that I would like to have is to be an in-house lawyer. I had spent a great amount of time researching the professions of the law major that I am studying. After that, I came to the conclusion that I'm really fit to be an in-house lawyer. In Vietnam, the profession of an internal lawyer has not really developed as in a foreign country. It is considered as a legal department within a company. The role of this professional is that they handle all legal matters for their company. There are many reasons why I think this job would suit me. First, I majored in law and I have the necessary skills like communication, reasoning, and analytical skills. In addition, this profession needs ethics and a high sense of responsibility, I think this is also an advantage of mine. One of the important reasons is it helps me to make a lot of money and I can protect myself and my family because I am a lawyer. As a final point, I hope that I can follow my dream career in the future.
For me, the ideal job that I would like to have is to be an in-
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house
lawyer.

I had spent a great amount of time researching the professions of the law major that I am studying. After that, I came to the conclusion that I'm
really
fit to be an in-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
lawyer. In Vietnam, the profession of an internal lawyer has not
really
developed as in a foreign country. It
is considered
as a legal department within a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. The role of this professional is that they handle all legal matters for their
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company
.

There are
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many
reasons why I
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think
this job would suit me.
First
, I majored in law and I have the necessary
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skills
like communication, reasoning, and analytical
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skills
.
In addition
, this profession needs ethics and a high sense of responsibility, I
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think
this is
also
an advantage of mine. One of the
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important
reasons is it
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helps
me to
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make
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a lot of
money and I can protect myself and my family
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I am a lawyer. As a final point, I hope that I can follow my dream career in the future.
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IELTS essay Describe what you think would be the perfect job for you

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