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Choose one of the following problems and write an article of 160-180 words, using the outline in 2. You can use the suggestions below.

Choose one of the following problems and write an article of 160-180 words, using the outline in 2. You can use the suggestions below. rbNG6
Nowadays, the quality of human life has been improving. There are more and more opportunities for students with disabilities to study in regular school with all other children. But they are facing a lot of discrimination in their life such as cannot take part in some activities regularly or get along with their classmates. Therefore, they are often left behind, and can't catch up with their friends in every aspect. How can we solve this problem and help these children? Firstly, people should learn more about children with visual impairments, and should understand and know what they need comprehensively. They have different learning difficulties, but that does not mean they cannot learn. Thus, parents and schools should provide some specialised materials and tools like Braille or large print books. In addition, they also can prepare computers or materials with large print in order to help them study better. Secondly, people should create a friendly school environment between students with disabilities and non-disabled ones. When becoming a part of a study group, we will discover their hidden talents. It is a beneficial way for them to get on well with everyone gradually, to become more sociable and take in everythings during all activities or lessons at school. In conclusion, it is necessary for all people to help disabled people, especially juveniles who are under the age of 18 years. Better understanding of students with visual impairments will help them overcome their adversities and do wonders for them.
Nowadays, the quality of human life has been improving. There are more and more opportunities for students with disabilities to study in regular school with all other children.
But
they are facing
a lot of
discrimination in their life such as cannot
take part
in
some
activities
regularly
or
get
along with their classmates.
Therefore
, they are
often
left
behind, and can't catch up with their friends in every aspect.

How can we solve this problem and
help
these children?
Firstly
,
people
should learn more about children with visual impairments, and should understand and know what they need
comprehensively
. They have
different
learning difficulties,
but
that does not mean they cannot learn.
Thus
, parents and schools should provide
some
specialised
materials and tools like Braille or large print books.
In addition
, they
also
can prepare computers or materials with large print in order to
help
them study better.

Secondly
,
people
should create a friendly school environment between students with disabilities and non-disabled ones. When becoming a part of a study group, we will discover their hidden talents. It is a beneficial way for them to
get
on well with everyone
gradually
, to become more sociable and take in
everythings
during all activities or lessons at school.

In conclusion
, it is necessary for all
people
to
help
disabled
people
,
especially
juveniles who are under the age of 18 years. Better understanding of students with visual impairments will
help
them overcome their adversities and do wonders for them.
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IELTS essay Choose one of the following problems and write an article of 160-180 words, using the outline in 2. You can use the suggestions below.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
246 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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