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Describe the holiday you recently had, where you went, who you went with what you did and why you enjoyed it.

Describe the holiday you recently had, where you went, who you went with what you did and why you enjoyed it. kYdo2

I would like to talk about the holiday I took to Berlin in Germany a couple of months ago. I chose to go there because I have a lot of friends and of cause business partners living there. I went with my child of then about two years old. I would have loved to go alone, but I had no choice because he was younger and not independent yet, so no one could take care of him just like I would do. We visited a lot of places with my friends, especially the local restaurants, game shows, local shops, and so many other places. I also had meetings with my business partners, we talked about how to better improve and grow my business. I really enjoyed the holiday because I was able to meet new people who were interested in what I do as an entrepreneur. Also, I was able to learn more about European culture, especially German culture. I would defiantly love to go there again because I love so many things about it, especially the people, mode of transportation and so much more. Tho, that's not my first time traveling to Europe but i love berlin most.

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