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Describe something important to you

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The laptop is the most important thing to me. My mother gave me it as a gift when I passed university last year. At that time, I really was on the cloud nine as it is the thing that I dream a long time. My laptop is silver in color and made of plastic. It belongs to the HP brand. It is not very big, about 30 centimeters long and 20 centimeters wide so I can bring it with me wherever I go quite easily. It makes sense to me not only in terms of monetary value, but aloso in terms of sentimental value. It is very useful for my study, especially in the current online learning period. For example, I can look up information on the Internet. In addition, I can use my laptop for entertainment. This device is so convenient for watching films or listening to music, which is helped me let my hair down after studying hard.

The laptop is the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing to me. My mother gave me it as a gift when I passed university last year. At that time, I really
 was on the cloud nine as it is the thing that I dream a long time. My laptop is A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.silver
silver in color
 and made of plastic. It belongs to the HP brand. It is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
, about 30 centimeters long and 20 centimeters wide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can bring it with me wherever I go quite easily
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 sense to me not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in terms of monetary value, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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aloso
 in terms of sentimental value. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful for my study, especially
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 online learning period. For example
, I can look up information on the Internet. In addition
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 my laptop for entertainment. This device is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 convenient for watching films or listening to music, which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 my hair down after studying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
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