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Describe something important that has been kept in your family for a long time

Here I would like to talk about the time or something important that has been kept in my family for a long time it is a clan necklace and it is a beautiful Gold jewellery gold necklace with matching earrings it is studded with rubies and emeralds it must be more than 150 years old it is family Heritage it has been handed down from generation to generation in my family the gold is so pure and that it still shines like new this design is evergreen once my mother went to a goldsmith to get a similar set made for my aunt but the goldsmith said that it is 9 could not be replicated as it was handmade now the sets available in the market are machine made it goes with all types of dresses my mother wear it with sarees and suits whenever my mother wears with red and green saree with this type of shirt she got a lot of compliments and matches with which Red and Green Emerald this goals at is one thing which has been the pride of our family for years

Here I would like to talk about the time or something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 that has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 for a long time it is a clan Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).necklace, and
necklace and
 it is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 Gold Possible spelling mistake. ‘jewellery’ is British English.jewelry
jewellery
 gold necklace with matching earrings it is studded
 with rubies and emeralds it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be more than 150 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 it is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 Heritage it has been handed
 down from generation to generation in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 the gold is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 pure and that it still
 shines like new this design is evergreen once my mother went to a goldsmith to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a similar set made for my Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).aunt,
aunt
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the goldsmith said that it is 9 could not be replicated
 as it was handmade This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the sets available in the market are machine made it goes with all types of dresses my mother wear it with sarees and suits whenever my mother wears with red and green saree with this type of shirt she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 compliments and matches with which Red and Green Emerald ‘This’ does not seem to match the plural noun ‘goals’. Did you mean “these”?these
this
 goals at is one thing which has been the pride of our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 for years