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Describe something healthy that you enjoy doing. You should say: - what you do. - where you do it. - who you do it with.

Describe something healthy that you enjoy doing. You should say: - what you do. - where you do it. - who you do it with. pbOkD
The first thing which comes to my mind when I hear a healthy habit is a meditation. It is good for both our mental and physical health. I can say it was one of the most beneficial habits that I regularly do. I have been doing meditation for 3 years and I started it after I graduate from school. In brief, meditation is a journey through our mind, and obviously, we need silence and a solitary place. So, mostly I meditate in my bedroom but when my brother is watching TV, I have to find another place to meditate cause a calm and quiet place is considered the best place for meditation. Mostly, I have been doing meditation alone in my bedroom while watching online sessions on YouTube, but I would like to try group meditation again. I had experienced it once when I was on a trip and my friend suggested I attend her meditation session.
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. It is
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for both our mental and physical health. I can say it was one of the most beneficial habits that I
regularly
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meditation
for 3 years and I
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started
it after I graduate from school.
In brief
,
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meditation
is a journey through our mind, and
obviously
, we need silence and a solitary
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place
.
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mostly
I meditate in my bedroom
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but
when my brother is watching TV, I
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have to
find another
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place
to meditate cause a calm and quiet
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place
is considered
the best
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place
for
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meditation
.
Mostly
, I have been doing
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meditation
alone in my bedroom while watching online sessions on YouTube,
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but
I would like to try group
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meditation
again. I had experienced it once when I was on a trip and my friend suggested I attend her
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meditation
session.
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IELTS essay Describe something healthy that you enjoy doing. You should say: - what you do. - where you do it. - who you do it with.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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