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Describe some of your favourite eating places in your city

Describe some of your favourite eating places in your city PWlkp
" Chat Lau Nuong " is my favourite restaurant in Ha Noi. It is a BBQ and hotpot restaurant that serves dishes from different Vietnam regions and overseas dishes. The restaurant has a large variety of traditional Vietnamese food such as pork chops, grilled pork, and beef meatballs. There is also some international cuisine for those who are willing to try something new like hamburgers and spaghetti. Despite the small space of this restaurant, it gives the guest a comfortable and warm feeling when enjoying the dishes here. The prices at this restaurant are affordable for many people in Viet Nam as the dishes are typically less than 100. 000VD per dish. It's also not too far from where I live, making it convenient to go on dates or just have dinner with friends.
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international cuisine for those who are willing to try something new like hamburgers and spaghetti. Despite the
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restaurant
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dishes
here. The prices at this
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are affordable for
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IELTS essay Describe some of your favourite eating places in your city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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