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Describe a website you have bought something from

Tiki is one of the most popular online retailers in Vietnam and its website has been widely used and favored by millions of users recently. It is very famous for the super-fast delivery service and a variety of authentic products with very reasonable prices. Their diverse products range from clothes to household items, but the most well-known one is books. Almost every kind of books are available on Tiki, either Vietnamese or English books. And the greatest thing is that the price they offer is always 20-30% lower than in book stores. I have bought dozens of books on Tiki and never a time did I feel disappointed. I always received books within a day and they were all in good quality. Last month, I decided to buy a new mobile phone as a self-reward after two months working extremely hard during the summer. Normally, I would go to the mobile store to properly examine the phone before making a decision to buy it or not. But this time, I made up my mind to try once buying an electronic item online to see how it would turn out to be. And I chose Tiki because the price on its website was 2 million Dong lower than in store. The process of purchasing was very simple as I could pay through online banking, which was super convenient. And the phone was delivered right on the next day with no breakage or errors at all. Needless to say, I was absolutely satisfied. I think I will continue using this website in the future.
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Tiki
is one of the most popular online retailers in Vietnam and its website has been
widely
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and favored by millions of users recently. It is
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very
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famous
for the super-
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fast
delivery service and a variety of authentic products with
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very
reasonable prices. Their diverse products range from clothes to household items,
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but
the most well-known one is
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books
. Almost every kind of
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books
are available on
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Tiki
, either Vietnamese or English
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books
. And the greatest thing is that the price they offer is always 20-30% lower than in
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book
stores. I have
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bought
dozens of
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books
on
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Tiki
and never a time did I feel disappointed. I always received
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books
within a
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day and
they were all in
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good
quality.

Last month, I decided to
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buy
a new mobile phone as a self-reward after two months working
extremely
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hard
during the summer.
Normally
, I would go to the mobile store to
properly
examine the phone
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before
making a decision to
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buy
it or not.
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But
this time, I made up my mind to try once buying an electronic item online to
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see
how it would turn out to be. And I chose
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Tiki
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because
the price on its website was 2 million Dong lower than in store. The process of purchasing was
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very
simple as I could pay through online banking, which was super convenient. And the phone
was delivered
right on the
next
day with no breakage or errors at all.

Needless to say, I was
absolutely
satisfied. I
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think
I will continue using this website in the future.
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IELTS essay Describe a website you have bought something from

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
262 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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