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Describe a present or gift someone gave you that you really liked.

I want to talk about a present i really liked and cherished, i chose to talk about this particular gift because it was the most memoirable gift i have ever recieved. I got this present on my 16th birthday from my grandpa before he died the following year, i really like this gift because i love my grandpa with all my heart and this was the very first and last gift i recieved from him before he passed away. I got a 18 karat gold necklace from him that had little locket with a picture of us together from the last Christmas we had together, the day we took the picture was a memorable day i had with my family, that day is a day i will always remember because of the sweet memories. Even after the passing of my grandpa, this gift he left me will forever remain a cherish able and profound gift.

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because
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memoirable
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gift
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got
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before
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because
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my grandpa with all my heart and this was the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
first
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I
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got
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a
A hyphen is missing if you mean the unit of fineness (gold, diamonds).18-karat
18 karat
 gold necklace from him that had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 locket with a picture of us together from the last Christmas we had together, the day we took the picture was a memorable day Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
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because
 of the sweet memories. Even after the passing of my grandpa, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpremiumofferinggrantbonusrelieftip
gift
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left
 me will forever remain After ‘a’, do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of ‘cherish’ is correct. If ‘cherish’ is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
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