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Describe a hotel you have stayed in. You should say: • where it is • what facilities it has • when you stayed there and say whether you would recommend it to a friend

Describe a hotel you have stayed in. You should say: • where it is • what facilities it has • when you stayed there and say whether you would recommend it to a friend gqj6A
I’m going to tell you about a house, which is slap bang in the middle of Dalat city where I have visited 5 years ago. It can be found in the middle of the pine forest so the atmosphere there was fresh and cool. I still remember at that time was winter so the weather was cold in the whole day. The house that I visited was kind of home stay which was built among big old pine trees allows visitors to observe the picturesque scenery around effortlessly. It has a Western architecture with patterns and decoration. Although it quite small, it was a fully furnished house so we felt very comfortable when living there. As I already mentioned, it’s hidden away in the forest. In front of my house stands a big old tree which existed more than 100 years ago. A small pond in which a school of fish was swimming slightly was seen behind my house. If you like roses, there had a large rose garden for those who wanted to take some photographs. Fundamentally, that is a great place for those who wanna forget about life for a minute. When it comes to the internal part of the house, I was surprised at the furniture which suits the western style. There was many rooms for us to stay, which is the private place for every members during the trip. However, if I had to choose the thing that I like most, I would go for cafeteria in the corner of the forest. It’s well-known for its tranquil atmosphere and a good collection of coffee. My dad ordered an espresso while my mom, a sweet tooth, chose a capuchino. I was very young at that time so I had ice-cream. We also were given pies in occasion of new year. People typically like to enjoy coffee and watched intriguing scenery from windows there. I think it’s a great place to visit. I fell head over heel with it because it not only refreshed my mind after working hours but also a place where everyone can get on well with each other.
I’m going to
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, which is slap bang in the middle of
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Dalat
city where I have visited 5 years ago. It can
be found
in the middle of the pine forest
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so
the atmosphere there was fresh and cool. I
still
remember at that time was winter
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so
the weather was
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cold
in the whole day.

The
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house
that I visited was kind of home stay which
was built
among
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big
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old
pine trees
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allows
visitors to observe the picturesque scenery around
effortlessly
. It has a Western architecture with patterns and decoration. Although
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it
quite
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small
, it was a
fully
furnished
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house
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so
we felt
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very
comfortable when living there.

As I already mentioned, it’s hidden away in the forest. In front of my
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house
stands a
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big
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old
tree which existed more than 100 years ago. A
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small
pond in which a school of fish was swimming
slightly
was
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seen
behind my
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house
. If you like roses, there had a large rose garden for those who wanted to take
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some
photographs.
Fundamentally
,
that is
a great
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place
for those who
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wanna
forget about life for a minute.

When it
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comes
to the internal part of the
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house
, I
was surprised
at the furniture which suits the western style. There was
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many
rooms for us to stay, which is the private
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place
for every
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members
during the trip.
However
, if I had to choose the thing that I like most, I would go for cafeteria in the corner of the forest. It’s well-known for its tranquil atmosphere and a
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good
collection of coffee. My dad ordered an espresso while my mom, a sweet tooth, chose a
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capuchino
. I was
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very
young at that time
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so
I had ice-cream. We
also
were
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given
pies in occasion of new year.
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People
typically
like to enjoy coffee and
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watched
intriguing scenery from windows there. I
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think
it’s a great
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place
to visit.

I fell head over heel with it
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because
it not
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only
refreshed my mind after working hours
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but
also
a
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place
where everyone can
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get
on well with each other.

IELTS essay Describe a hotel you have stayed in. You should say: • where it is • what facilities it has • when you stayed there and say whether you would recommend it to a friend

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
354 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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