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Describe a hero in your life

Describe a hero in your life LbaOR
When I was young, I always thought that heroes were only in superhero movies, do extraordinary things, later growing up I realized that the hero of my life is my father. I have always had a speciial respect for him. He is a good husband. He always took care of my mother, helping her with housework. Besides, he is also a sympathetic father. He taught me with the smallest things, the experienes that he has gathered throughout his life. Not only that, he is a very hard worker, always treats his colleagues well. He is the biggest inspiration in my life. Maybe I won't find a hero who gives me as much as he do. He's the hero of my life, what about your hero?
When I was young, I always
thought
that heroes were
only
in superhero movies, do extraordinary things, later growing up I realized that the hero of my
life
is my father. I have always had a
speciial
respect for him. He is a
good
husband. He always took care of my mother, helping her with housework.
Besides
, he is
also
a sympathetic father. He taught me with the smallest things, the
experienes
that he has gathered throughout his
life
. Not
only
that, he is a
very
hard
worker, always treats his colleagues well. He is the biggest inspiration in my
life
. Maybe I won't find a hero who gives me as much as he
do
. He's the hero of my
life
, what about your hero?
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IELTS essay Describe a hero in your life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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