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Describe a famous person whom you would like to meet.

Describe a famous person whom you would like to meet. jQDBN
Music is something important in my life. It helps me relax after hours of self-study or when I am tired. And talk about my favorite music creator, he is Den Vau. His real name is Nguyen Duc Cuong. And he is known as a rapper. I got to know him about 7 years ago, I stumbled upon him in a MV on Youtube that name is “Dua nhau di tron”. he is a slender man with the black hair, bushy beard and lug teeth like his rap name. Even so, he looks quite handsome. About his personality, optimistic is a character that I think no one more than him. His optimism, enjoying life and simplicity are expressed through his rap lyrics. And it’s also himself. That’s why I like his songs. I also know that before he became a rapper, he was a garbage collector, then was a waiter for a coffee shop. And he's so proud of it, he even puts it in his rap lines. I have known him for a long time, but I have never met him in real life. So, in the future, I will go to his show one day to enjoy his music in the most realistic way. And if I lucky enough to meet him, I will say thank you to him for the energy he brings to everyone in general and to me in particular.
Music is something
important
in my life. It
helps
me relax after hours of self-study or when I
am tired
. And talk about my favorite music creator, he is Den
Vau
. His real name is Nguyen
Duc
Cuong
. And he
is known
as a rapper.

I
got
to know him about 7 years ago, I stumbled upon him in
a
MV on
Youtube
that name is “
Dua
nhau
di
tron”.
he
is a slender
man
with the black hair, bushy beard and lug teeth like his rap name. Even
so
, he looks quite handsome.

About his personality, optimistic is a character that I
think
no one more than him. His optimism, enjoying life and simplicity
are expressed
through his rap lyrics. And it’s
also
himself. That’s why I like his songs. I
also
know that
before
he became a rapper, he was a garbage collector, then was a waiter for a coffee shop. And he's
so
proud of it, he even puts it in his rap lines.

I have known him for a long time,
but
I have never met him in real life.
So
, in the future, I will go to his
show
one day to enjoy his music in the most realistic way. And if I lucky
enough
to
meet
him, I will say thank you to him for the energy he brings to everyone
in general
and to me
in particular
.
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IELTS essay Describe a famous person whom you would like to meet.

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