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Describe a family menber or a classmate

Describe a family menber or a classmate kjp2d

I have a lot of friend in my school but one my classmate who leave an impreesion on me the most is Lulia, she is eighteen years old and she is working part-time job at the supermarket. She lives in HCM CITY- a beautifull city in Viet Nam. We study togerther for more than ten years and during these years we talked, played and did lots of thinh including studying, playing sport, reading interesting book at the library, … She has a good looks with brown eyes, a long black hair and always smile with me. I mostly remenber her because he was a good classmate and her study very well. She always help me with my homework. I have many menmorise regarding the things we used to do togerther anh that the reason why i still remenber her. When im in trouble she ready to help me in any case. She is the third person after my mother and father who im usually share anything with her, when im sad she always witj me if i need. I love her personality the most because she have a benevolent heart she always help people when they are in trouble even strangers. And this is all the reason why she become the person i love the most.

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a lot of friend
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but
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lives
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thinh
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good
 looks with brown eyes, a long black hair and always smile with me. I mostly
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remenber
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because
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good
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very
 well. She always The pronoun 'She' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "helps", "helped".helpshelped
help
 me with my homework. I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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menmorise
 regarding the things we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to do Possible spelling mistake found.together
togerther
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 that the reason why Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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still
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remenber
 her. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
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 share anything with her, when Possible spelling mistake found.I'mIMinisIit
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 need. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 her personality the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 a benevolent heart she always The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "helps", "helped".helpshelped
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 when they are in trouble even strangers. And this is all the reason why she become the person Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the most. 