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describe a advertisement that you like to watch

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Nowadays, we are bombarded with an array of advertisements from newspapers, television, or social media like Facebook, TikTok and so on. Honestly, I think that advertisements are just a waste of time because they don’t really do any good for the general public. But, then, suddenly I come across an advertisement about Biti’s Hunter on youtube and it caught incontinently my attention. The most interesting thing about this ad is its meaningful message. While other commercials at the time tended to be short and focused on humor to attract customers, Biti’s Hunter honers the cultural values of Vietnam in general and of Hanoi city in particular. They retold the story about generation Z’s personality. Regardless of whether Hanoi is sunny or rainy, they still break the way and live to the fullest with capital art like hip-hop, skateboard. . .
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a waste of time
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The most interesting thing about this ad is its meaningful message. While other commercials at the time tended to be short and focused on humor to attract customers,
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Biti
’s Hunter honers the cultural values of Vietnam
in general
and of Hanoi city
in particular
. They retold the story about generation Z’s personality. Regardless of whether Hanoi is sunny or rainy, they
still
break the way and
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live
to the fullest with capital art like hip-hop, skateboard.
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IELTS essay describe a advertisement that you like to watch

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
140 words
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