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Describe about my favorite member in my family

Describe about my favorite member in my family DYojo

First thing I noticed was she has round face and short hair that make she very cute, with short height that make she more lovely than. If I look at her the first time cannot guess her age. She has a slender figure and a double chin that look so dinky. When she when outside she always neat and smart looking. I love her very much!

First
 thing I noticed was she has round face and short hair that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
It seems that a verb is missing after "she". Please verify.she isshe was
she
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 cute, with short height that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
It seems that a verb is missing after "she". Please verify.she isshe was
she
 more lovely than.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I look at her the first
 time cannot guess her age. She has a slender figure and a double chin that look This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 dinky. When she when outside she always neat and smart looking. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much! 