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Human beings are different from other creatures, because they are the only creatures which can consciously increase the complexity of their thoughts. For example, all of the creatures know and sense that if it rains, the earth gets wet. However, human beings are the only ones who can write poems, songs or even novels about the rain. Moreover, humans are the only species that can contemplate about their long term plans and purposes. For example, when a teacher is giving an advice to his/her student, he/she can say, if you study Computer Science, you can be a Software Developer. That stream of thought can be simple for human beings but for the other creatures, it requires the invention of abstract concepts such as science, university education and professions and even if they were smart enough to learn some of these concepts, they might not be able to analyze as thoroughly as human beings. It’s understandable because, so abstract are some of these concepts that even some of the humans have difficulties understanding them. Furthermore, it is mentioned that they also need to invent these concepts which have been invented by the humans who can be defined as geniuses. So impressively did they use their minds that they even transcended the mental limits of the mankind. Therefore, it was impossible for the other creatures, which have even more limited mental skills, to invent the concepts that has been invented by the greatest minds of the mankind. In conclusion, human beings are different from the other creatures because of their mental skills, cognition ability and the capability of inventing and thinking complex and abstract concepts that can increase their chance for survival and improve their life quality as a whole.
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all of the
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know and sense that if it rains, the earth
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wet.
However
,
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human
beings are the
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ones who can write poems, songs or even novels about the rain.
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,
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humans
are the
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only
species that can contemplate about their long term plans and purposes.
For example
, when a teacher is giving
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to his/her student, he/she can say, if you study Computer Science, you can be a Software Developer. That stream of
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thought
can be simple for
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beings
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for the
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, it requires the invention of abstract
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,
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abstract are
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concepts
that even
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some of the
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humans
have difficulties understanding them.
Furthermore
, it
is mentioned
that they
also
need to invent these
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concepts
which have
been invented
by the
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humans
who can
be defined
as geniuses.
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So
impressively
did they
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use
their minds that they even transcended the mental limits of the mankind.
Therefore
, it was impossible for the
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other
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creatures
, which have even more limited mental
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skills
, to invent the
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concepts
that has
been invented
by the greatest minds of the mankind.
In conclusion
,
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human
beings are
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different
from the
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other
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creatures
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because
of their mental
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skills
, cognition ability and the capability of inventing and thinking complex and abstract
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concepts
that can increase their chance for survival and
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improve
their life quality as a whole.
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IELTS essay DAFDOFDASFDASFDASFADFDASAFDFDFADFDAS

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
288 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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