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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? aM3X
It has always been scripturient for me to write about significant challenges around the world. Challenges are observed all around the world at different fields, But there are some challenges that affect people at global level. Today's action is tomorrow's reaction and its effects can be seen in the future. This essay will shed light on the significant challenges that are changing the world's perview in the upcoming paragraph. One big problem is that, the ice is melting at a large scale in antatartic and is causing the rise in the sea level. Because of this increasing sea level, people who are living on small island are moving to bigger continents for survival. Therefore, due to the movement of population, children who are studying in schools and colleges are being affected. One other problem is that, due to the environmental changes the education system is changing to battle the crisis all around the world. The change which is being brought in the world will affect many nations and drop in the quality of students in the future years. However, alternate solutions are being researched to give better results. Overall, among all the countries, my country Spain is expected to face a steep fall in the field of education, environment and population in the next 10 years. Increased sea level is leading to a drastic climatic change and affecting the population in the country. To conclude, if proper solutions and steps are taken by the government to avoid such kind events in the future would be big leap for the country. These initiatives taken by the government and is supported by the people of the country to bring about the change.
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challenges
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are observed
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world
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different
fields,
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some
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challenges
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people
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level
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Today
's action is tomorrow's reaction and its effects can be
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seen
in the future. This essay will shed light on the significant
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challenges
that are changing the world's
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perview
in the upcoming paragraph.

One
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big
problem is that, the ice is melting at a large scale in
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antatartic
and is causing the rise in the sea
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level
.
Because of this
increasing sea
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level
,
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people
who are living on
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small
island are moving to bigger continents for survival.
Therefore
, due to the movement of population, children who are studying in schools and colleges are being
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affected
.

One other problem is that, due to the environmental
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changes
the education system is changing to battle the crisis all around the
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world
. The
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change
which is
being brought
in the
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world
will affect
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many
nations and drop in the quality of students in the future years.
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, alternate solutions are
being researched
to give better results.

Overall
, among all the
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countries
, my
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country
Spain is
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expected
to face a steep fall in the field of education, environment and population in the
next
10 years. Increased sea
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level
is leading to a drastic climatic
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change
and affecting the population in the country.

To conclude
, if proper solutions and steps
are taken
by the
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government
to avoid such kind
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events
in the future would be
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big
leap for the
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country
. These initiatives taken by the
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government
and
is supported
by the
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people
of the
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country
to bring about the
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change
.
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IELTS essay Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
280 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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