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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? OxPy
It is argued that in the near future all the nations world wide would struggle with issues realted to population and education along with environment. If we talk about a developing country like India, I am sure in the next decade there would be a shortage of natural resources due to over population. Along with that, it is said that with growing years education will be left just merely for documents rather than actually gaining knowledge because of the present system. This artice would discuss the issues and what changes can help in avoiding or completely preventing the situation. As per the global warnings given by NASA any many other organizations, it has been said that if the usage or rather wastage of resources continues like this, a day without water or food would not be that far. Now to overcome this situation it is really vital to educate people on the importance and how every individual can make a difference. Students should be taught at a very young age about these challenges so that they are well aware about such issues. Even though the country is trying to improve the education management system, it is really difficult to inform students the value of education and how they can utilize it. In a survey done recently in a school, atleast 80% students claimed they only mug up to just clear the exams. To make it interesting, teachers should make sure all the students participate in the class. In the development of any country it is true that the future is based on how well educated their people are. To conclude, several problems like environmental issues, raising population and deteriorating education system can be resolved by raising awareness among people.
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is argued
that in the near future all the nations
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world wide
would struggle with issues
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realted
to population and
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education
along with environment. If we talk about a
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developing country
like India, I am sure in the
next
decade there would be a shortage of natural resources due to over population. Along with that, it
is said
that with growing years
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education
will be
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left
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just
merely
for documents
rather
than actually gaining knowledge
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because
of the present system. This
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artice
would discuss the issues and what
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changes
can
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help
in avoiding or completely preventing the situation.

As per the global warnings
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given
by NASA any
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many
other organizations, it has
been said
that if the usage or
rather
wastage of resources continues like this, a day without water or food would not be that far.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
to overcome this situation it is
really
vital to educate
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people
on the importance and how every individual can
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make
a difference.
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Students
should
be taught
at a
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very
young age about these challenges
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so
that they are well aware about such issues.

Even though
the country is trying to
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improve
the
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education
management system, it is
really
difficult to inform
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students
the value of
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education
and how they can utilize it. In a survey done recently in a school,
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atleast
80%
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students
claimed they
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only
mug up to
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just
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clear
the exams. To
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make
it interesting, teachers should
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make
sure all the
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students
participate in the
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class
. In the development of any country it is true that the future
is based
on how
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well educated
their
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people
are.

To conclude
, several problems like environmental issues, raising population and deteriorating
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education
system can
be resolved
by raising awareness among
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
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IELTS essay Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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