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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. PPoj

Countries are getting indifferent day by day in expanse of the similar demand for products all over the world. To my mind, the process is not positive and following paragraphs prove my opinion with worthy examples based on my own knowledge. Initially, I'm partly of the notion that the world should be different and all dissimilarity are valuable for the human such as culture, superstitions and so on. The same things may make the world a 'boring company' that everyone may become ordinary and boring inhabitants. Furthermore, there is no need to travel, if the world is similar. Because you don't have to go somewhere to see the Tower Bridge or buy the Chinese silk, if everywhere is the same. Afterwards, this kind of global development can affect the lifestyle of people easily. That's to say, humans may loose the culture, unless the world is different. For example, because of identical demand for products, some special items may get extinct which are highly valuable for some nations such as chinese porcelain. Moreover, the quality of good may decrease because there will be no chance to compare them in order to examine if it is good or bad. To conclude, it is obvious that you can afford anything you want anywhere and it may cause some negative aspects to the human.

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. To my mind, the process is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and following paragraphs prove my opinion with worthy examples based on my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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world
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different
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so
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make
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world
 a 'boring This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
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' that everyone may become ordinary and boring inhabitants. Furthermore
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Because
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have to
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see
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buy
 the Chinese silk, if everywhere is the same.

Afterwards, this kind of global development can affect the lifestyle of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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. That's to say, humans may Did you mean "lose" (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?lose
loose
 the culture, unless the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
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. For example
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because
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some
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get
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some
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chinese
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, the quality of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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because
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good
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.

To conclude
, it is obvious that you can afford anything you want anywhere and it may cause This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 aspects to the human. 