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Coronavirus: A laboratory made virus

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In my opinion the statement is a Dialectic method because it stated there that some people are saying that coronavirus is intentionally built in a laboratory, while others say that we are now facing world war III and China was winning because all countries around the world are suffering from this virus. In the lecture, we can see the definition of dialectic method is somehow similar to debate but with a different concept because it excludes subjective elements like emotional appeal. Since the background of Coronavirus is quite questionable because China was the first country that made a vaccine it is not subjective because we can really conclude that something is fishy about this virus especially some experts said that this virus is not really related to the bat that they claimed the origin of the virus. However, a study about Coronavirus proved that this virus really came from the bat because there is a history of two major coronavirus outbreaks: SARS and MERS. That’s why we cannot say that this virus really came from the laboratory or this is a bioweapon, and we are facing world war III and China is winning. China is also one of the countries that are affected by this pandemic and they spend millions of dollars just to keep chinese people safe from the virus. So the assumption that others are claiming is purely an opinion because the science itself already proven that this outbreaks was naturally caused and not through the process of bioengineering.

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because
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