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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words.

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. with this opinion? 0j8B
In this fast-growing generation, people tend to look for easy consumption food to save time instead of making home-made food. In my opinion I strongly agree with the above notion along with these easy scrutinize both sides of views and provide some relevant examples and explanations before drawing any conclusion. At the outset their myriad arguments in favor of my instance nowadays ready to eat foods are more popular in this modern era for instance fast food and restaurant food these types of food make people fat In addition it change individual lifestyles like lazy and dizzy. The most impeccable example I can quote here is that one of my friend who works as a software engineer
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IELTS essay Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. with this opinion?

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