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Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor. 3abKd
Most people agree that smoking should be prohibited by law. Even though smoke-free law has a lot of benefits in all sectors of life, we should consider this argument on both sides. On the on hand, scientific evidence proves that anti-smoking legislation decreases all kinds of death related to smoke and lead to better national health. According to World Health Organization, the number of deaths in smoke-banned countries such as Australia and Austria has dramatically decreased, and its population is increasing year by year thanks to legislation. Furthermore, implementing these bans all around the world assists not only smokers but also protects everyone from second- hand smoke. Every year one out of ten non-smokers die from second-hand smoke. However, opponents of the law against smoking contribute the idea that the law is conflicted to democratic countries where human rights cared the most. They believe that it' s their choice whether they smoke tobacco or not in public places. Moreover, critics of the law stress that how can authorities control human smoking habits even smokers could not control themselves? Smoking or not is just up to them, and it is about ethics. In conclusion, I am with those who oppose the law against smoking. Instead of controversial restrictions and any laws, they should provide enough private rooms or any extra space in any public place.
Most
people
agree
that
smoking
should
be prohibited
by
law
. Even
though


smoke-free
law
has
a lot of
benefits in all sectors of life, we should consider this

argument
on both sides.

On the on hand, scientific evidence proves that anti-smoking legislation

decreases
all kinds of death related to smoke and lead to better national health.

According to World Health Organization, the number of deaths in smoke-banned

countries such as Australia and Austria has
dramatically
decreased, and its population

is
increasing year by year thanks to legislation.
Furthermore
, implementing these bans

all around the world assists not
only
smokers
but
also
protects everyone from second-

hand
smoke. Every year one out of ten non-smokers
die
from second-hand smoke.

However
, opponents of the
law
against
smoking
contribute the
idea
that the law

is
conflicted to democratic countries where human rights cared the most. They
believe


that
it&
#39; s their choice whether they smoke tobacco or not in public places.
Moreover
,

critics of the
law
stress
that how can authorities control human
smoking
habits even

smokers
could not control themselves?
Smoking
or not is
just
up to them, and it is
about


ethics
.

In conclusion
, I am with those who oppose the
law
against
smoking
.
Instead
of


controversial restrictions and any
laws
, they should provide
enough
private rooms or

any
extra space in any public place.
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IELTS essay Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

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