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Requesting authorization for foreign national sponsored by employer to work in Australia in an occupation on Priority Migration Skilled Occupation List (PMSOL)

Requesting authorization for foreign national sponsored by employer to work in Australia in an occupation on Priority Migration Skilled Occupation List (PMSOL) WynB0
Nabadawa Vithanage Gayan Hemantha, Passport bearer of N6622951, a CPA Accountant who is working as an Accountant in Mega Lifesciences (Australia) Pty Ltd at 60 National Avenue, South Eastern Business Park, Pakenham, Victoria 3810. As a company, Mega Lifesciences (Australia) Pty Ltd is a subsidiary company of the Mega Lifescience Public Company which operated in Thailand. The company is operating in more than 30 countries all over the world and with the intention of bringing holistic solutions for the health and wellness of humans. We are a TGA certified manufacturer producing high-quality pharmaceutical products to the Australian and international market. Gayan Hemantha is one of the key persons who is bearing overall responsibility for the financial health of a group, producing financial reports, and developing strategies based on financial research and establishing the financial stability of the group. He is handling an incredibly responsible job and his commitment, hard work, and loyalty towards the association are always appreciated. But unexpectedly in July 2020, Gayan has moved to his country due to the extreme condition of his father’s life as he was suffering from lung cancer and his father desired to see him and his support was required for the family at that time. But unfortunately, his father has passed away and his death certificate is also attached herewith for your kind references. Due to travel restrictions imposed by the governement he is still stuck at his country and Due to travel restrictions imposed by the governement he is still stuck at his country since last year. But now his presence is required at Australia as a compnay to carry out his job smoothly. Therefore, we would like to request from you to grant permission for his arrival in Australia. We anticipate a positive reply on a humanitarian basis by considering the above matter.
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Nabadawa
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Vithanage
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Gayan
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Hemantha
, Passport bearer of N6622951, a CPA Accountant who is working as an Accountant in Mega
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Lifesciences
(Australia)
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Pty
Ltd at 60 National Avenue, South Eastern Business Park,
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Pakenham
, Victoria 3810.

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company
, Mega
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Lifesciences
(Australia)
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Pty
Ltd is a subsidiary
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company
of the Mega
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Lifescience
Public
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Company
which operated in Thailand. The
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company
is operating in more than 30
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countries
all over the world and with the intention of bringing holistic solutions for the health and wellness of humans. We are a TGA certified manufacturer producing high-quality pharmaceutical products to the Australian and international market.

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Gayan
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Hemantha
is one of the key persons who is bearing
overall
responsibility for the
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financial
health of a group, producing
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financial
reports, and developing strategies based on
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financial
research and establishing the
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financial
stability of the group. He is handling an
incredibly
responsible job and his commitment,
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hard
work, and loyalty towards the association are always appreciated.

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But
unexpectedly
in July 2020,
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Gayan
has
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moved
to his
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country
due to the extreme condition of his father’s life as he was suffering from lung cancer and his father desired to
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see
him and his support
was required
for the family at that time.
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But
unfortunately, his father has passed away and his death certificate is
also
attached herewith for your kind references. Due to travel restrictions imposed by the
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governement
he is
still
stuck at his
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country
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and


Due to travel restrictions imposed by the
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governement
he is
still
stuck at his
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country
since last year.
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But
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now
his presence
is required
at Australia as a
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compnay
to carry out his job
smoothly
.

Therefore
, we would like to request from you to grant permission for his arrival in Australia.

We anticipate a
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positive
reply on a humanitarian basis by considering the above matter.
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IELTS essay Requesting authorization for foreign national sponsored by employer to work in Australia in an occupation on Priority Migration Skilled Occupation List (PMSOL)

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
303 words
5.5
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