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Housing and waste disposal are major issues of many countries to what extent do you agree and disagree

Housing and waste disposal are major issues of many countries to what extent do you agree and disagree MMr5p
Waste management has becoming an alarming issues of many developing countries. The main cause of improper disposal management are overpopulation and industralisation. It makes the duty of regimes and citizens to take effective steps to minimise the rubbish. The numerous reasons of throw the garbaze on surrounding vacant area without second thought, what would be their effects on environment. Firstly, it is happen just because of insufficient space of dumping in populated area. People migration from rural to urban area maks condition more worse. Earth surface is covered by bulidings or apartments which cause the paucity of landfills. For instance, in metropolitan cities in India, have inadequate land for dumps and improper measures of disposal management and citizens throw the rubbish on residing area, which causes harmful impact on land as well on environment. Second cause will be important to considered is industralisation, most of factories release the non biodegradable products into the soil which gets mixed in it. A survey conducted by National Waste Management, revealed that 65% factories makes contribution in Waste disposal. Thirdly, due to lack of inconsideration about cleanliness among the citizens, also provoke this phenomenon. They don't think, it makes the duty of them to cleanisess of their own town. To combat with these issues, there are several measures, government should conducts regular inspection in factories, if any industriest does not follow protocol of waste disposal then they take should strong legislation on them. Moreover, regimes should provides free dustbins to community and bins are marked with specific labell for solid and liquid waste disposal. In addition to this, official authorities should allocate specfic area where rubbish could be dumped.
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management
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issues
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many
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developing countries
. The main
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cause
of improper
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disposal
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management
are overpopulation and
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industralisation
. It
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makes
the duty of regimes and citizens to take effective steps to
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minimise
the rubbish.

The numerous reasons of throw the
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garbaze
on surrounding vacant
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area
without second
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thought
, what would be their effects on environment.
Firstly
, it is
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happen
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just
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because
of insufficient space of dumping in populated
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area
.
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People
migration from rural to urban
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area
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maks
condition
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more worse
. Earth surface
is covered
by
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bulidings
or apartments which
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cause
the paucity of landfills.
For instance
, in metropolitan cities in India, have inadequate land for dumps and improper measures of
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disposal
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management
and citizens throw the rubbish on residing
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area
, which
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causes
harmful impact on land
as well
on environment.

Second
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cause
will be
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important
to considered is
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industralisation
,
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most of factories
release the
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non biodegradable
products into the soil which
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gets
mixed in it. A survey conducted by National
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Waste
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Management
, revealed that 65% factories
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makes
contribution in
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Waste
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disposal
.
Thirdly
, due to lack of inconsideration about cleanliness among the citizens,
also
provoke this phenomenon. They don't
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think
, it
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makes
the duty of them to
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cleanisess
of their
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own
town.

To combat with these issues, there are several measures,
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government
should
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conducts
regular inspection in factories, if any
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industriest
does not follow protocol of
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waste
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disposal
then they take should strong legislation on them.
Moreover
, regimes should
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provides
free dustbins to community and bins
are marked
with specific
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labell
for solid and liquid
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waste
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disposal
.
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to this, official authorities should allocate
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specfic
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area
where rubbish could
be dumped
.
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IELTS essay Housing and waste disposal are major issues of many countries to what extent do you agree and disagree

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4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
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