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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. DD57

The computer plays a vital role in modern society. Hence, a number of people argue that the computer is extremely useful for academic purposes as teaching-learning aids. Whereas others believe it is harmful to the students. Let's discuss both viewpoints prior to my opinion. In this modern world, the Computer plays an essential role in studies. In foreign counties mostly students won't use a computer instead of paper and pen to take down notes during lectures and also they might use their own laptop to record the lecture class and they replay lecture when our they want to clarify their doubts. Teachers can also utilize the computer for PowerPoint presentations to take their lectures effectively. Most of the research projects shall be done by the graduates with the help of the computer. Additionally, they can search for synonyms and use computers to learn practical skills. For instance, A website like Youtube is very essential to learn the procedure prior to their practical examination. On the other hand, students might chat with strangers via social media like Whatsapp, Facebook, and Instagram. A few students got addicted to online video games and fully use their computers to play games this might reduce students' grades in the exams. Yet, some strangers are trying to hang out with others' bank details and misuse their accounts for crimes. In conclusion, Computer has both benefits and adverse effects. But its merits outweighs its demerits. In my point of view, Computer is extremely useful for the academic purpose and it helps the student to learn more about the topic and score high grade in their exam.

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