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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job . On yhe other hand, other people think getting experience and developing soft skills is more important . Discuss.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On yhe other hand, other people think getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss. wpYd
Finishing university education is an issuse which frequently generates debate, with supporters maintaining that it is a indespensable getting a good ocupation, whilst opponents claim that it is unnecessary to ginish university for getting a good profession. One very convincing argument in favor of the graduating of University is that university teachs them proper education. For instance, university which are Oxford, Harward there are penetrating the society by educating students efficiency. They can be experts of their fields full filling the intailments of their occupation. The other's argument is that the University can provide with teoretical and practical sessions which can promote students with revenue generating opportunities. Thereby finishing University inseparable of getting a job. In contrast, opponents of completing University point out that graduating university is unindespensable burden on people. People are able to engance their experience instead of studying university. Firstly, getting experience promotes to people to decide what they want to do. To be more precise, they know how to do it, how to tackle some problems regarding to education because of their experience, and sof skills. Secondly, people particularly students can get retire money as soon as they become to retire. Finally, it is fair to say that humans can get a accupation as long as they have a good experience or soft skills. In other words, a plehora of companies hire employees inspite of diplom. All thing considered, it can be concluded that a certain degree of completing university is always indespensable the best course of action would be to attempt to achieve a balance between graduating on the one hand, and getting experience, and enhancing soft skills' on the other.
Finishing
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university
education is an
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issuse
which
frequently
generates debate, with supporters maintaining that it is
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a
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indespensable
getting a
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good
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ocupation
, whilst opponents claim that it is unnecessary to
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ginish
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university
for getting a
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good
profession. One
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very
convincing argument in favor of the graduating of
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University
is that
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university
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teachs
them proper education.
For instance
,
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university
which are Oxford,
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Harward
there are penetrating the society by educating students efficiency. They can be experts of their fields full
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filling the intailments of
their occupation. The other's argument is that the
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University
can provide with
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teoretical
and practical sessions which can promote students with revenue generating opportunities. Thereby finishing
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University
inseparable of getting a job.
In contrast
, opponents of completing
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University
point out that
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graduating
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university
is
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unindespensable
burden on
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people
.
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People
are able to
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engance
their
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experience
instead
of studying
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university
.
Firstly
, getting
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experience
promotes to
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people
to decide what they want to do. To be more precise, they know how to do it, how to tackle
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some
problems
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regarding to
education
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because
of their
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experience
, and
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sof
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skills
.
Secondly
,
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people
particularly
students can
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get
retire money as
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soon
as they become to retire.
Finally
, it is
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fair
to say that humans can
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get
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a
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accupation
as long as they have a
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good
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experience
or soft
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skills
.
In other words
, a
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plehora
of
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companies
hire employees
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inspite
of
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diplom
. All thing considered, it can
be concluded
that a certain degree of completing
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university
is always
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indespensable
the best course of action would be to attempt to achieve a balance between graduating on the one hand, and getting
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experience
, and enhancing soft
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skills
' on the other.
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IELTS essay Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On yhe other hand, other people think getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss.

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