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complaint regarding the credit card

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To Whom it may concern, I am writing this email regarding my last credit card bill with a due date of 22nd October. There is an error on it. I have been billed twice for the same purchase. Actually, The initial payment was made on September 10th. I purchased one laptop valued at 899$ and that transaction was successful on the website. However, I didn't check the transaction status on the bank application. I recognized it when I got the monthly statement for my credit card. Furthermore, I inquired regarding the charges by calling the online store but everything clear on their end. Moreover, They sent the transaction receipt with the exact time and date with the transaction-id. I think there might be some technical error or server issue. I hope you will look into this matter and will do a detailed inquiry to get to know where the mistake happened. I look forward to your response and thanks in anticipation. Regards Naidu
To Whom it may concern,

I am writing this email regarding my last credit card bill with a due date of 22nd October. There is an error on it. I have
been billed
twice for the same
purchase
.

Actually, The initial payment
was made
on September 10th. I
purchased
one laptop valued at
899$
and that transaction was successful on the website.
However
, I didn't
check
the transaction status on the bank application. I recognized it when I
got
the monthly statement for my credit card.
Furthermore
, I inquired regarding the charges by calling the online store
but
everything
clear
on their
end
.
Moreover
, They
sent
the transaction receipt with the exact time and date with the transaction-id. I
think
there might be
some
technical error or server issue.

I hope you will look into this matter and will do a detailed inquiry to
get
to know where the mistake happened.

I
look forward to your response and thanks in anticipation.

Regards

Naidu
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IELTS essay complaint regarding the credit card

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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