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comparison Son Tung MTP and Justin Bieber

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There are two the most famous male singers that I have known. One of them is Son Tung M-TP, and the other is Justin Beiber. When you compare them, they seem dramatically different people, but they have something in common. There are many reasons why Son Tung M-TP seem like Justin Bieber. To begin with their careers, they are both famous singers. Son Tung M-TP is a renowned singer in Viet Nam, similarly, Justin Bieber is a well-known singer in America. Son Tung M-TP also has a large amount of popular songs on billboard such as Em cua ngay hom qua, Hay trao cho anh, etc…, similarly, Justin Bieber has many million-views songs on Youtube like Baby, Stay, etc…. Additionally, they have many scandals in their careers. Justin Beiber causes numerous scandals such as bullying his fans and colleagues, arrogant attitude, etc…. Similarly, Son Tung M-TP also has a series of plagriarism scandals and unfaithful rumours in his relationship. They are also talented singers and have countless scandals. Dispite their similarities, they have many differences. First of all, I notice is the relationship. After breaking up with Selena, Justin Bieber got married to Haily Beldwin in 2018. Conversely, Son Tung M-TP still has a complex relationship with his girlfriend and does not intend to get married. Furthermore, they have different seniorities. Justin Beiber started singing career when he was a child, so he has a long seniority. On the other hand, Son Tung become well-known when he issues his song called “Em cua ngay hom qua”. He wrote this song when he was adult about 18 years old so his seniority is shorter than Justin Beiber. As this essay has demontrated, both Son Tung and Justin Bieber are renowned singers I know. Both are talented and famous, also have many scandals. Now, Justin Bieber is happy with his wife but Son Tung still has a complex relationship with his girlfriend. Based on some information, Son Tung will cooperate with Justin Bieber in a forthcoming music project.
There are two the most
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Tung
M-TP, and the other is Justin
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. When you compare them, they seem
dramatically
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people
,
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they have something in common.

There are
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reasons why
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Son
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Tung
M-TP seem like Justin Bieber. To
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begin
with their careers, they are both
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singers
.
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Tung
M-TP is a renowned
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in
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Viet
Nam,
similarly
, Justin Bieber is a well-known
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singer
in America.
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Son
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Tung
M-TP
also
has a large amount of popular songs on billboard such as Em
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cua
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ngay
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hom
qua, Hay
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trao
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cho
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anh
, etc…,
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, Justin Bieber has
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million-views songs on
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Youtube
like Baby, Stay, etc….
Additionally
, they have
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scandals
in their careers. Justin
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Beiber
causes numerous
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scandals
such as bullying his fans and colleagues, arrogant attitude, etc….
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,
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Son
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Tung
M-TP
also
has a series of
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plagriarism
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scandals
and unfaithful
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rumours
in his
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relationship
. They are
also
talented
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singers
and have countless scandals.

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Dispite
their similarities, they have
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differences.
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, I notice is the
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. After breaking up with Selena, Justin Bieber
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married to
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Haily
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Beldwin
in 2018.
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,
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Tung
M-TP
still
has a complex
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relationship
with his girlfriend and does not intend to
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married.
Furthermore
, they have
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seniorities
. Justin
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Beiber
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started
singing career when he was a child,
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he has a long seniority.
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,
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Tung
become well-known when he issues his song called “Em
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cua
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ngay
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hom
qua”. He wrote this song when he was adult about 18 years
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his seniority is shorter than Justin
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Beiber
.

As this essay has
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demontrated
, both
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Tung
and Justin Bieber
are renowned
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singers
I know. Both
are talented
and
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,
also
have
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.
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, Justin Bieber is happy with his wife
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Son
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Tung
still
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relationship
with his girlfriend. Based on
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information,
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Son
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Tung
will cooperate with Justin Bieber in a forthcoming music project.
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IELTS essay comparison Son Tung MTP and Justin Bieber

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
336 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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