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Compare the advantages of marrying at young age to marrying at an older age. State and support your preference.

Compare the advantages of marrying at young age to marrying at an older age. State and support your preference. 6xkNx

I believe that marriage at Older age is usually more successful than at young age because people at their youth period are inexperienced and naïve. Therefore, they are more prone to make mistakes. Being young is perceived as a divine gift. Young adults have a great perspective before their eyes and are ready to take risks. They can be easily carried out by their emotions. Having fiery passion and falling in blind love are some main characteristics of the young. Going through years of life, experiencing different relationships and gathering knowledge about the management of emotions helps a. . .

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young
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 adults have a great perspective This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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 their eyes and are ready to take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsdangers
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. They can be easily
 carried out by their emotions. Having fiery passion and falling in blind This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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 main characteristics of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewbuddingyouthfulinexperienced
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. Going through years of life, experiencing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 relationships and gathering knowledge about the management of emotions This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
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