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modern technology has brought about changes in the roles of men and women discuss some of these changes do you think these changes have been beneficial

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Nowadays, nobody doubts that technology has revolutionized human life. The impossible has turned to be possible and human's quality of life has improved drastically. Technology has had a deep impact on every aspect of our lives so that the traditional role of men and women has been touched by its magic. I believe that technology has made males and females equal in regard to their socio-economical value in modern societies. The mile stone for modern world is industrial revolution, when technology stepped in and replaced the manual labor force with machines. Before this time, productivity of. . .
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IELTS essay modern technology has brought about changes in the roles of men and women discuss some of these changes do you think these changes have been beneficial

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98 words
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