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If you are a person who love pet, you will not ignore two lovely pets: dog and cat. They are two popular animals and quite friendly with us. However, they also share some prominent district points. The first diffirent between cat and dog is an appearance. Dog 's body is quit sturdy and strong. Unlike the dog, cat's body is soft silky fur. In addition, character is one of points which distinguish pet cats and dogs. Dogs need a lot of attention from their owners, so you have to spend more time taking care of them. In contrast, cats are independent so they do not take as much time of their owners. In conclusion, as mentioned above, their are some major distinct points between pet cats and dogs.
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IELTS essay compare and contrast two pet

Essay
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1 paragraphs
128 words
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