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company use variety of methods to improve the sale of their products.what are those methods ,which is the most important methods

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thesedays, the purpose of increased the growth of items by different types of ways tried through companies. however, many companies use advertising method which helps to improve sales of their products. this essay will shed light on most effective way to increase sales of the company productsin conclusion, there are multiple ways to improve the company products sale, however i believe that online advertising is more influence to impove company sale among all
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IELTS essay company use variety of methods to improve the sale of their products. what are those methods, which is the most important methods

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  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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