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Climate change does not affect people's lives. Therefore, no work should be done to stop it. What what extend do you agree or disagee with this statement?

Climate change does not affect people's lives. Therefore, no work should be done to stop it. What what extend x2nVy
climate change is one of the biggest issue that can represent a big threat to life on earth. However in some people's opinion we should accept it rather than attept to stop it. i completely disagree with this idea, the reason for that in my view that people still have time to solve this problem, plus reduce the human influence on the Earth's climate. there are variety measures that individuals and governments are able to take to prevent, or at least mitigate, climate change. firstly, Governments are able to add some laws to limit the carbon dioxide emission that lead to global warming. they can allow "green taxes" on drivers, airline companies and other polluters, plus they could spend some money in renewable energy production from solar. , wind or water power. secondly, individuals, we need also try to limit our part contribution to climate change, by becoming more energy saving, like flying less and using bucycles and public transport. Furthermore, the public can influence on the work of governments by support for the politicians who offer to tackle climate change, rather than for those who would prefer to ignore it.
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climate
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is one of the biggest issue that can represent a
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threat to life on earth.
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, the reason for that in my view that
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people
still
have time to solve this problem, plus
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reduce
the human influence on the Earth's climate.

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are variety measures that individuals and
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governments
are able to take to
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prevent
, or at least mitigate,
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climate
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change
.
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firstly
,
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Governments
are able to
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add
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some
laws to limit the carbon dioxide emission that lead to global warming.
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can
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allow
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green taxes
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on drivers, airline
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companies
and other polluters, plus they could spend
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some
money in renewable energy production from solar.
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,
wind or water power.
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secondly
, individuals, we need
also
try to limit our part contribution to
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climate
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change
, by becoming more energy saving, like flying less and using
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bucycles
and public transport.
Furthermore
, the public can influence on the work of
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governments
by support for the politicians who offer to tackle
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climate
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change
,
rather
than for those who would prefer to
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IELTS essay Climate change does not affect people's lives. Therefore, no work should be done to stop it. What what extend

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